Notice of absence from arqios
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
Embrace the evening, let it wrap you
in its gentle whisper, softly gilding
each breath towards a tranquil rest.
Welcome the night, with open heart,
accept its peace, its quiet song,
for life's dance needs both light and shadow.
Surrender, not in defeat, but in grace,
allowing the natural flow of time
to cradle your spirit with tender hands.
The stars don’t resist their twilight,
nor does the moon fight its fade.
In the stillness of this night,
find a beauty in release,
the serenity of surrender,
as the world pauses to breathe.
Bathe in the calm of dusk,
the soft embrace of nightfall,
and let go, with gentle acceptance,
into the welcoming arms of sleep.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: January 28th, 2025 04:58
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 65
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Thad Wilk
Comments14
Beautiful writing ))
Thanks kindly ππ»π
Beautifully written piece encapsulating all the things i wish i could do as the night approaches, reading this i can picture how it is meant to be, enjoyed the read
Thanks so much. So glad it brought wishes and picture to life ππ»ππ»π
You are very welcome
Got to love the night. Well done. A very positive poem.
Thanks mate ππ»ππ»π
Whether metaphor or not this poem holds its beauty and sings on to sleep. Should the metaphor be true so will death come too.
Yes indeed. I had an inkling you would delve into that! The poem has met its revealing. Thanks Soren ππ»π
I might be able to relax, now the storms have passed!
Freaky weather patterns of lateβ¦ mmmβ¦ something is afoot in the eternalsβ¦.
This works beautifully, both literally and as a metaphor. A wonderfully beautiful poem, my friend! πΉπ
Thatβs really good to know Tristan, thanks for let me know. ππ»ππ»π
I'm dozing off! Not this poem bored me. lol. π
Go to sleep now dear orchy, πΆπ΅
The perfect pre-retirement poem for folk of all ages & persuasions .. so very much enjoyed .. Neville
Loving the take on this! A most suited application ππ»ππ»π
Awesomazing poem,
wonderfully vivid imagery,!! π€©
Flows like a gentle stream,
and really penned, superbly!! π
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
Thanks Thad ππ»ππ»π
Powerful
Thanks TWCππ»ππ»π
A most calming poem, soft words of embrace into a restful night or maybe something even longer. Stillness, serenity, calm, gentle, kind vocabulary. A beautiful piece arqios.
Thank you Cassie, even as a child I had always that notion about the role of Night in our lives. ππ»ππ»π
Wonderful calming words arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy ππ»ππ»π
I really like this . Fine Poem.
Thanks Kevin, I shall try to make a remembered note of that ππ»π
such a tender and lyrical way of expressing how to end the day, and fall asleep peacefully. Bravo, well done
Thanks safina ππ»π
most welcome. have a great weekend
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