I wish I were young again, I would bow to the majestic
beauty of the sleepy sunset.
Happy like a kid with a kite, my feet would bathe in the
snakelike streams escaping through
the meadows, beneath the autumn sky.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments10
Profoundly beautiful, I'm thinking you are still young in any case, a very romantic feel this has, must be the ending with the autumn sky, I felt it and I saw it. Beautiful. 🌹
Thank you, sweet Teddy.
A most beautiful image and thought
Thanks.
Wonderfully romantic, my friend! A beautifully penned poem! 🙏❤️
Thank you.
You're welcome.
A romantic vision in a beautiful setting, enjoyed the read
Thanks
You are very welcome
Wonderful poem and
brevity! 🤩
I'd wish the same
too indupidably! 😌 👍
Awesome read,
penned superbly,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks
If only.....
Andy
Yes
Yet always young at heart, when we allow 😊👍🏻🕊
Some lovely imagery there, Thomas. A fine write.
Thanks.
Lovely Words . We look back at our youthful days and realise we took so much for granted.
‘Happy like a kid with a kite’ indeed.
So true.
The majestic beauty of the sleepy sunset. I really liked this.
Thanks.
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