Notice of absence from arqios
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Amber frosted reeds
in scintillating wind
swaying, dancing,
synchronised now
syncopated and back
shouting then singing
xanthine etudes
boisterous and raucous
bright and nimble
leaving pliant
graceful kisses
on a pair of soft
smooth cheeks
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 4th, 2025 01:47
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Beautiful imagery. I often see those reeds with their feathery plumes at the marina and on the river bank. They take on a life of their own in the wind. You have used some fine vocab in this poem arqios. Lovely and sensual too.
Thank you Cassie 🙏🏻 I’m so glad that scene 🎬 came across 🕊️
Beautiful words showing the beauty of the reeds argios.
Andy
Thanks Andy, much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️
It's that well-known friend again, xanthine, though I'm talking gibberish. Being uncultured, I dunno what it is! lol. Good write Mr Minuet.
Thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
Botanical fireworks set to music in this poem in a metaphoric work of passion. Chef's kiss to this
Love that phrase: “botanical fireworks!” 👨🍳 🤌🏻
Poor thing must be sweating in the breeze… must be tough-going 😔🫥
Beautiful images painted with the dancing of the reeds, enjoyed the read
Glad you enjoyed it. That brings real joy 🙏🏻🕊
You are very welcome
Beautiful, natural, sensual, linguistically, lyrically titillating. All of this and above. Loved this, my friend. An easy fave. By the way what would coffee be without xanthine? Decaf of course! LOL! 🙏🌹
That’s so true! Thank you T🙏🏻🕊
You are most welcome!
Beautiful
Thank you Tony🙏🏻🕊
You're welcome
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful image created.
Written back in the day when big words were kind of a thing. Tweaked and dusted for a possible spin on the bitumen. Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊
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