untitled 575 (feathered frolick)

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
A reminder to extend an olive branch… where possible.
Let us sup of the dignity of kindness and humility…

 

birds chitter chatter

perched high upon tension wires

cable party-line



feathers brush the sky

sweet chirps’ rising crescendo 

Nature’s melody

 

 

Sunrise paints the dawn

wispy salutations call

chirpy morning song

 

 

winds sway gentle boughs

feathery motion signals

Sky-bound semaphore 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2025 01:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: A change of pace, hopefully to everyone’s enjoyment… thoughts of Springtime, thoughts of lively peace. 🙏🏻
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 69
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Cheeky Missy
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  • Teddy.15

    Even though senryu doesn't need a title this one could be called electric feathers. Nicely done! 🌹

    • arqios

      I like that title so much, but my hyperactive imagination takes me all places with the highly charged word: “electric” 🤣 but that’s just me; it is a superior title! Thanks dear Teddy. And first response on the comment box today as we’ll YAY👍🏻🕊🙏🏻

    • Caring dove

      A nice and interesting way with words .. liked the read ))

      • arqios

        Thanks kindly, glad this was well liked 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻

      • LP2187

        I like these senryus, enjoyed the read!

        • arqios

          Thank you kindly 🙏🏻🕊️

          • LP2187

            you're very welcome

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful words arqios bringing Natures artwork to us.

            Andy

            • arqios

              Thanks Andy, nature can be a tad underrated these days… 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

            • orchidee

              Good writes A. Possible title: 'A Spring Chorus' - if you're thinking of Spring!

              • arqios

                Writes you are O! Another cool title! You and Teddy are on a roll...er coaster! Love it already 👍🙏🏻🕊️

                • orchidee

                  Or call it Feathered Frolick as you've put it!

                • sorenbarrett

                  Don't know if its the feathers, song or spring weather but this one was soft, light and bright. A most uplifting poem sorry for the pun I was winging it.

                  • arqios

                    Oh go with it, I was sensing it and having fun along with you. 🙏🏻🕊️

                  • Neville



                    each of these is splendid .. and of course, strictly speaking no title required .. Neville

                    • arqios

                      Exactly... it can detract from what's happening "on the ground." 🙏🏻🕊️

                    • David Wakeling

                      This was delightful. It took me to a pleasant place. Wonderful Well done.

                      • arqios

                        Glad it did! Thank you 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

                      • Poetic Licence

                        Beautifully worded and a beautiful picture, feels like spring now after that read, enjoyed

                        • arqios

                          That’s a good feeling, precursors of Spring 🌼👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

                          • Poetic Licence

                            Yep a good feeling, Thank you

                            • arqios

                              Thank you too 🙏🏻 Is that a statue of Confucius?

                              • Poetic Licence

                                I believe so, i could not sleep last night, so wanted something to do, it is better than the pic i had.

                              • Cassie58

                                Beautiful bird song, uplifting with thoughts of spring. Very nicely composed arqios.

                                • arqios

                                  Thanks Cassie 🙏🏻

                                • Thomas W Case

                                  Superb work. Full of brilliant imagery.

                                  • arqios

                                    Thanks TWC ✌🏻

                                  • Tom Dylan

                                    Some fine lines there. Nice one, mate.

                                    • arqios

                                      Thanks Tom 🙏🏻



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