Notice of absence from arqios
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Forget
the balm of barometric exuberance.
This night
no longer young, dissipates.
Recall
the dewy welcome of sun-quaffed green.
Yesterdays
revive severed umbilical dreams.
Peruse
the present with fleeting acumen.
Today
ceases yet emerges again tomorrow.
Ignite
the kindling of autumnal reticence.
Perhaps
genial kindnesses shall spring.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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May hat kindness arise each day arqios.
Andy
Yes, may it be so. Thanks Andy🙏🏻🕊️
I 'ignited'. I lit a match while leaving the gas on. Doh!
Nice! That would have been a fright to watch 🙏🏻🕊️
Love this poem's innovation. I have thought of trying something similar but have gotten caught up in the technicalities complications. Maybe someday I'll work it out. Here the use of the single word serves as an echo that comes back again and again reverberating a message sent. Lovely work my friend
That echo makes for both a literary and a thinking device. 🙏🏻 thank you Soren 🕊️
I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem about the hope of a new day
Thanks David 🙏🏻🕊️
This one jumped out at me - original, beautifully written and conveying a hope for the new day. A great write.
Thanks Michael. I’m glad that this re-release has resulted in this reception. It needed another airing and my gratitude is quite substantial 🙏🏻🕊️
We will all hope for a better day, and i am sure in the end kindness will prevail, enjoyed today's read
Thank you 🙏🏻🕊
You are very welcome
Perhaps kindness can be overrated
Nice One arqios
Cool And Nice Rhythms
Thanks Reynaldo🙏🏻🕊️
Very much admire the structure of this poem, but the message is far more important. Kindness counts. Fine writing arqios.
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