Notice of absence from arqios
an absence of Presence conjures Absence…
an absence of Presence conjures Absence…
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It may be dark;
but tonight
effervescent lights dance
to a blaring par-tay tune
while in the shadows, we parlay...
reach over me
and flick the switch;
let bokeh find clarity
in our fervent embrace.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 5th, 2025 06:30
- Comment from author about the poem: Published elsewhere as "that focal moment"
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Cassie58
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Comments8
Well done, my friend! This conveys a journey from a lively, chaotic party scene to a moment of intimate connection, It's the power of personal connection in finding clarity amidst life’s distractions. Thoroughly enjoyed this! See you on the other side of my vacation...and to answer your question...I went to a warmer location. 70s F here. 🙂
Oh nice! 70F and wifi 👍🏻✌🏻enjoy 👍🏻✌🏼
Totally! Thanks!
A beautiful this reaches deep inside both emotion and the visual image. The warm touch so good to feel in the dark can be enhanced in the light. Blurs so soft and fuzzy warm heat more in the light of day. The erroticism of a dark blur becomes heated passion in clarity
Much appreciated Soren,,when you get into a poem it’s like a freight train at full tilt🙏🏻🕊️✌🏻
Great write
Thanks Tony🕊️✌🏻
You're welcome
Saviour those fleeting magical moments when they arise, enjoyed the read.
Thank you kindly 🙏🏻🕊️
You are very welcome
This appears to be one of those up close and personal poems that always tickles my fancy .. I love it .. but then I'm a bit of a weirdo .. Neville 😎👍
Cheers N👍🏻
Great word on play 🤣
Thanks for catching on to that! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️
A poem with a warm feel about it. A touch of magic if I am not mistaken. Sounds like a light bulb moment. Lovely .
Magic is where it’s at… the pure imagination generation has so much to offer the 21st century! Thanks Cassie 🙏🏻🕊
Keep that focus arqios and life will be good,
Andy
Thanks Andy, I thought you already commented here. I’ve gone and lost my days. Hope my latest post does justice to this one’s tone… I guess we shall see soon enough😊🕊🙏🏻
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