they shall weep no more

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
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We were walking today

for our daily constitutional

and a lady and her dog

were walking toward us

from the opposite direction.

 

We smiled, they smiled, and

we all walked our trajectories.

After making our first loop

we met up with them again,

this time with much friendlier,

more companionable smiles.

I mentioned a few moments later

how nice it was for the lady

not to be alone in her walk and

that I could be the dog in our situation.

 

So she reaches for my collar

and I began to woof, then

she mentions how she loves

to see the willows swaying

happily in the breeze, that

they don’t seem to be crying any longer.

 



 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 8th, 2025 05:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: Random days, special ways… something Andy exemplifies…
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, rin
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  • sorenbarrett

    In the literal sense it makes no sense so I go to the metaphorical. Here I find a gold mine as males arn't we all dogs? Controlled by that sexual colar willing to please for a little attention and closeness? And the willows weep no more.

    • arqios

      You are most definitely not wrong there my friend. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

    • John Prophet

      Enjoyable read. Well written.

      • arqios

        Thanks John, glad β€˜twas enjoyable πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Intriguing write. If the man (who is able to bring home the bacon each week) appears to be under control then he won't wander?!!
        I once showed a video of the Dax song "To Be a Man" to my wife. She didn't like it. Not that I'm saying I agree with everything Dax said in that song!

        • arqios

          Intriguing song, thanks for pointing that way. So many nuances to be had. A valid interpretation here as well. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

          • Mutley Ravishes

            You're welcome.

          • Poetic Licence

            A clever piece highlighting that males need for a little attention and how easily our thoughts and actions are predicted and controlled, enjoyed the read

            • arqios

              Ah, now there’s an angle that reveals! Thanks for your insightful comments, as always. This reflects on how you pay attention and quite astute in observation. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • arqios

                With the initial comments I am getting that it could pose a challenge to weigh in on this post. But y’all have been so accommodating and kind… I’m truly thankful for your effort, time, kindness, and input. It means so much πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

              • orchidee

                Good write A.

                • arqios

                  Thanks OπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

                • Cheeky Missy

                  Bet you're a much cherished puppy dog more than worth any mere puppy love. Exquisitely rendered with gorgeous imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

                  • arqios

                    Ah… the β€œpuppy” word is quite all encompassing in this scenario. Thank you kindly πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

                  • David Wakeling

                    Nice story of random meeting. Delightful read

                    • arqios

                      It’s really quite fascinating, these random encounters of life’s journey πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

                    • Teddy.15

                      I certainly see a positive outcome, I read this a few times, nonsense or most sense? As a woman I can say,. This poem can be read more than one way. 🌹

                      • arqios

                        I agree.. there is sense in most everything, we but need to use the corresponding lenses or mindset. Thanks dear TeddyπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Beautiful m message arqios.

                        Andy



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