sunday morning sees
an arm with a bark finger
pointing into marina shallows
it is nothing but a broken tree limb
casting a shadow
leaning over the shattered bank
finding golden moments
poured from a pitcher of sun
streaming rays of light
little kisses on the surface
fish play underwater
ripples on my memory
poetic heartbeat
how distant you are
and how magnificently missed
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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Comments11
The magnificent imagery that melts into marvelous metaphor fill this beautiful poem with wonder. You have tied it all togeather well in this piece Cassie
Pleased you enjoyed this poem, and I thank you for your very generous review. It is mist encouraging sorenbarrett.
Such a touching and gentle piece of writing, really enjoyed, Thank you Cassie
Thank you Tobani, your thoughts are very much appreciated. All good wishes.
You are very welcome
Stunning imagery which takes me to every last memory of holidays by a marina, and there are many, especially here in Italy breathtaking poetry my dear Cassie. 🌹
Dear Teddy, thank you for your continued support. I am thrilled you enjoyed this poem. Many thank yous 🌹💜
Nature paints a picture of memory and reveries. Beautiful 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
Pleased you enjoyed this poem arqios. Many thank yous. Your comments are valued.
You’re welcome Cassie 🙏🏻🕊
A wonderful poem with beautiful imagery, as always, Cassie. Well done! ❤️🙏
Thank you so much Tristen. You always leave me such encouraging responses. You are appreciated. Pleased you enjoyed this poem.
Wonderful write
Many thanks Tony for your lovely comment. Much appreciated.
You're welcome
A fine write, Cassie. Nicely done.
Thank you Tom. Pleased you enjoyed my poem. All the best.
Wonderful images created here.I was taken to the water.Excellent
Thank you so much David. I appreciate your visit and kind words. All the best.
Wonderful words of memories passed Cassie.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy for a lovely review. Have a good day.
I am not surprised that so many poets have made these fine words a firm favourite of theirs.. it would surely feature amongst mine if I were to go down that route ..for without any doubt, these words were felt and are damn near perfect.. Neville
Well that’s a win win if I’m not mistaken. Thank you so much Neville for your kind words. Enjoy the rest of the day.
Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing
I appreciate your kind review. Thank you for stopping by RIS. Have a great day.
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