when sun illuminates sky’s winter grey
to cast a golden gleam on crystal sea
it raises spirits wrapped in warm dressed clothes
a treasure chest of jewels for all to see
like diamond dust that sparkles cluster bright
said gems a given gift to mesmerize
they can not fail to please it’s natures way
a feast for all with tired weary eyes
how lifting is the prize of dazzling light
a chance to watch the dance on salty waves
the rays are like a tonic sent to heal
escape from mindsets troubled darkest caves
how fine these moments are for us to hold
when breakers rolling in are kissed with gold
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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‘Funny’ how gold on grey will always happen towards the west at sundown and always to the east at sunup. 🙏🏻🕊
Gosh, how very quick you are to respond arqios, but I thank you. A favourite place, in Brixham which does happen to be in the west country. The light on water, always uplifting. Enjoy the rest of your day.
A very picturesque poem that paints with such artistic wonder. My favorite lines are the last two they come crashing like golden caped waves on shore
Thank you so much Soren for your lovely review. Have a good weekend.
It does have that power, even i the miserable one feel better when the sun is out, Thank you for another uplifting enjoyable read.
Thank you Tobani. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Have a good weekend.
You are very welcome and you too
Thank you dear poet
and every line offers the reader a kiss of gold Cassie....
another wonderfully written poem;
Thank you so much Melvin for a very lovely review. Have a good weekend.
This gave me goosebumps, your poetry is simply gorgeous and needs it's own book 🌹 what grace and elegance you have 💜
Dear Teddy, you are always so generous with your praise. Thank you so much and have a good weekend. 🌹💜
This is so beautiful. It took me to Sunrise over the ocean.It doesn't get better than thisWonderful
Thank you so much David. Pleased my poem transported you. Have a good weekend.
Excellent write Cassie
Thank you so much Tony. Pleased you enjoyed Gold on Grey. Have a great weekend.
You're welcome
Wonderful words Cassie, that sun will always sparkle on your life.
Andy
Thank you Andy for your very kind words. Have a great weekend.
Your Poem could be a Canvas by Turner. Enjoyable.
Thank you Kevin. That is a huge compliment. I do try and paint with words. Have a good Sunday.
A beautiful ode to springtime and good tidings. Well done.
Thank you so much Dan for your kind words and support. Happy Sunday.
Nice One Cassie
Enjoyed The Soothe Of This Gem
Pleased you enjoyed this latest poem Reynaldo. Many thanks for stopping by. Happy Sunday.
If this is not as near perfect as classical poetry ever gets, then I'll be blowed if I know what is .. and just between us, for the record, I'm with Teddy on this. Neville
Good bright sunny Sunday Neville. Thank you for your welcome and lovely review. For the record you and Teddy are tops.
Absolutely beautiful! You are quite the gifted writer
Thank you for a lovely encouraging visit. All the best Ninjagirl.
Indulgently gorgeous with equally charming rhythmic motion, how sweetly rendered with beautiful imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
Dear Missy, thank you for all your encouragement. I owe you some visits dear poet. Will call very soon. Happy Sunday.
Beautiful imagery. You bring this scene to life.
Thank you Thomas for stopping by. All the best.
A lyrical write, with flawless cadence! A well penned poetic piece!
Many thanks for calling in on my work. Pleased to meet you on MPS.
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