Wise Man Speak

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Wise Man Speak.

 

Life is Like.

A Game of.

Jenga.

Move One Wrong.

Piece.

And it All.

Comes Tumbling.

Down.

 

Wise Man Speak.

 

Do Not Desire.

What You Need.

If You Need.

Then Desire.

 

Wise Man Speak.

 

Do Not Take.

What You Want.

Only Take.

What You Need.

Because You Could.

End Up.

Wanting.

What You Need.

 

Wise Man Speak.

 

If You Are Scared.

Of Heights.

Do Not Reach.

For The Top.

 

Wise Man Asks.

 

If I say.

I love you.

And you Say.

I hate You.

Are we feeling.

Just The Same.

 

Tobani Jan 2025

  • Author: Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: February 7th, 2025 04:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another wonderful week over reading some wonderful [poetry on this site, which i have enjoyed very much. Thank you to all who have read my scribbles, commented, left feedback and even clicked the like button, all are very much appreciated. I leave you with a bit of fun for the weekend, and hope each and everyone has a wonderful weekend.
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Comments8

  • sorenbarrett

    A fun and thought provoking read. And to the question I would say yes it is but a reflection of one another. Loved it I feel as if I have had several Chineese dinners with fortune cookies.

    • Poetic Licence

      Thank you for your feedback, have a great weekend

    • arqios

      Oh, let the week simmer and it’s wisdom filters! Wise move of wise men. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

      • Poetic Licence

        Than k you Arqios, have a great weekend

        • arqios

          You too Tobani; and thank you for supporting my poetry as well. It means a lot πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

        • Tony36

          BRAVO

          • Poetic Licence

            Thank you Tony Have a great weekend

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • David Wakeling

              Always enjoyable to learn some wisdom in your poems.Well done mi amigo

              • Poetic Licence

                Thank you for your feedback, have a great weekend

              • Goldfinch60

                Good words and advice Tobani.

                Andy

                • Poetic Licence

                  Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

                • John Prophet

                  Enjoyable read.Well done.
                  John

                  • Poetic Licence

                    Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated

                  • Cheeky Missy

                    Thank you so very much for this charming bit of wisdom rendered with enough humor to soften the more serious reality tastefully offered. I love it.

                    • Poetic Licence

                      Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

                      • Cheeky Missy

                        Oh but my pleasure, you're very welcome. I'd have commented when it was first posted but had no time. Thank you again.

                      • Simurgh

                        Wonderful poem Tobani, with lots of reflection filled with wisdom and sincerity!
                        I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for writing such a nice poem!😊🌹🌹

                        • Poetic Licence

                          Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

                          • Simurgh

                            You are most welcome 😊 Continue with this beautiful way of writing!✍️✍️🌹🌹



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