Tickles from the past

sorenbarrett

All hearts belong to someone, on each virgin page we leave a mark
Smudges that summon, flies of rage or tickles of love from the dark
An itch that can't be quieted, infestations that can't be swept away
Tingling taste, a quiet hum on the tongue, of a prayer yet to pray

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  • orchidee

    Good write SB. Doh! I used a ticket of the past - it was dated last year. (Did I? lol).

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi any tickets I have from the past remain unpaid. Now tickles that is a different matter that must be taken up with a different judge. Appreciate the read and comment.

      • orchidee

        'Tickle' but no 'slap'? Heehee

      • Teddy.15

        Beautiful, yes we should never ignore an igling 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much my friend for the read and kind supportive words they are most appreciated

        • Reynaldo Casison

          Nice One Soren
          Nice And Reflective

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much for the read and kind words they are most appreciated

          • Poetic Licence

            And all hearts should be treated with care, nicely worded reflective poem, enjoyed the read

            • sorenbarrett

              Thnk you for your read and supportive words that are most valued

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • arqios

                “The prayer yet to pray” now there is an excellent line ! 🙏🏻🕊

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much Cryptic I deeply appreciate the review and kind words as always.

                • Thomas W Case

                  I love this. Powerful and poignant. Brilliant writing.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much Thomas for the review and most kind words your visits are always valued

                  • Salvia.S 🌹

                    Beautiful write!

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Salvia for your kind support it is appreciated

                    • NinjaGirl

                      another beautiful write!

                    • Cassie58

                      Lovely meaningful and reflective write Soren. Beautiful poetry. All the best.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks so much Cassie your input is always appreciated

                      • Hey!

                        Love it, keep writing I'd love to see more!!!!

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you so much Lil for the read and comment your support is most appreciated

                          • Hey!

                            Yea no problem!

                          • Neville


                            One would have to be a fool not to give this the thumbs up .. it’s a complete knockout 👍

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks Neville appreciate it

                            • Goldfinch60

                              So very true soren, we all leave marks in our lives for others to see.

                              Andy

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thanks Gold for the visit and words they mean a great deal



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