Notice of absence from arqios
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At its very heart, Melbourne city breathes:
an undulating vibrant tapestry of life and colour,
from the bustling markets of Queen Vic to the quiet lanes of Fitzroy.
Trams rattle through the streets, a symphony of motion and sound,
while the aroma of fresh coffee mingles with the scent of eucalyptus.
In Federation Square, we gather, a mosaic of cultures and stories;
each face a part of the city's soul, each voice a note in its melody.
The Yarra River winds through it all, a silver thread in the urban quilt,
connecting past and present, of both nature and man-made wonder.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: One of the cities I love to visit and stay at but have never lived in as a resident.
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A fine write A.
Thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place I have never been but now feel I have and stitched so nicely with the silver thread of river and words holding not only nature and man's accomplishments together but transcending space pulling me to a place far away. Loved it.
Thanks Soren. I wish I’d written more about the cities I’ve been too. 🙏🏻🕊️
Wonderful view of that city arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy 🙏🏻🕊️
From the imagery in this piece it's clearly a wonderful place to visit, enjoyed the read
I feel that almost every place has something worth visiting about it, within reason. Thank you most kindly 🙏🏻🕊
You are very welcome, have a lovely weekend
You too! 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you
Everyone I have spoken to from Melbourne really like the place.From this poem I can see why.Nice tribute
And now that I have rellies actually living there it will be easier to get around 🙏🏻🕊
Nice One Arqios
Nice Vibrant Rhythms
Thanks friend 🙏🏻🕊
Thankful for the marvellous reception today. I will now attempt to comment on your equally wonderful poems. 🙏🏻🕊
Hi Melbourne!
Its your old enemy, Sydney
Shut your cakehole
And listen to me
Your coffee's crap
And an Opera House
You lack
Anymore of this nonsense
And I'll give you a slap!
Nice one …. I’m a proper Sydneyite or was until we moved up north. 🙏🏻🕊
Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the mental trip! 🌹👏 Well done, my friend! Cool to see you on Insta too! Yay!
Yay! 🙌
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Demolition of large parts of what was a pristine Victorian city during and around the sixties was a tragedy. Should have been preserved in aspic. Still, seems there may be enough left to please.......
All in the name of progress (sic) 🤑💰💲
Nice piece of work👍🏼
Thanks John, your acknowledgment is much appreciated and means so much 🙏🏻🕊️
Wonderful descriptive Poem.
Love to go there or anywhere in OZ.
Let’s be hoping the economy and stability of international relations improves!
Tell me I wasn't naughty to feel I'd been there thanks to you and this exquisite translation of life where I'll probably never truly taste it, yet believe I have, because of this. Deliciously rendered with excellent imagery and a sweetly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing your expertise. I love it.
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