Oh Heart oh Heart be loved?
are you shy?
do you hide?
love is harder to forget than to recall
more seldom than a tear is wet
less common than a moonlit night?
oh Heart oh Heart be loved?
are you shy?
do you hide?
there are many ways to write about love
and much has been written by the greats
but isn't it so damn poetic?
the very words that really are
the be all or end all of love
are simply the words, we don't say yet we mean?
&
the things we say yet are untrue?
leaving the very concept of love
up in the air.
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Teddy.15 (
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Comments5
But pure love comes to us Teddy as it has to me.
Andy
I know you are very lucky and deserve every bit. 🌹
Happy Valentine’s Day Teddy. Beautiful poetry as usual, in your own unique style.
Your words a reminder:
Communication is key, and when you don’t have that, things start to fall apart. And of course it is the things you don’t say that you should have, that will be remembered most. And a heart that is shy, suffers most. And love up in the air is the pits. That is how your poem spoke to me this morning.
I hope you have something special planned for today, as we do. And have a grand weekend. ❤️🌹
A very happy Saint Valentine's to you my dear friend, I have something incredibly special, I'm going to work lol 🤣 thank you for your very beautiful review. Have a wonderful weekend my dear Cassie. 🌹
Surely you deserve much better 😂
lol 😂 I doubt it! He usually buys me a present tomorrow in the valentine's sale 🤭❤️
Teddy this I feel is one of if not your greatest write. It reads almost Shakespearian and rings with a sense of immortality in wording and in meaning. There is timeless wisdom here. On occasion I feel jealous of a poem that someone else has written and this is one such time.
Oh my goodness, you just gave me humble chills. Thank you so much, coming from you feels like I just won in every way. I wasn't even sure if this made any sense at all. Biggest of hugs my dear sorrenbarret, know you are never alone and that in fact you are In my heart dear friend. 🌹
Uncontainable, untameable, unframable… love it is…
Thank you arqios 🌹
Teddy you always remind me how love is the greatest thing/emotion ever! 🌹😁👍
Do I? I think it's you that does that... 🌹 💜
Its us 😁👍🌹
finalmente 🌹 🌹 🌹
😉🌹🌹
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