Just a Bit Of Fun

Poetic Licence

Wise Man Say (2).

 

Wise Man Say.

Don't walk around with.

Your eyes closed.

Then you cannot see.

Where you are going.

 

Wise Man Say.

Beware of fakes.

Because not all fakes.

Are real fakes.

 

Wise Man Say.

Those who shout.

Loudest.

Fear the most.

 

Wise Man Say.

If you want a good.

Dishwasher.

By a machine.

 

Wise Man Say.

If you lend me 5.00.

I can pay you back the.

5.00 I owe you.

 

Wise Man Say.

Don't look back.

You will walk into.

What's coming.

 

Wise Man Say.

If wanting a night.

Of passion.

Tidy the garden first.

 

Wise Man Asks.

 

If Revenge Tastes

Sweet.

Why Does It Always

Leave a Bitter Taste

In The Mouth.

 

Tobani Jan 2025

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  • arqios

    Funny with sharp edged truths 🙏🏻🕊️

    • Poetic Licence

      Thank you for your kind words enjoy the rest off your day

      • arqios

        You too! Welcome 🙏🏻🕊

      • sorenbarrett

        Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.

        • Poetic Licence

          Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest off your day

        • Neville



          such wonderful wise words ..

          • Poetic Licence

            Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day.

          • Cheeky Missy

            Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

            • Poetic Licence

              Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest off your day

            • Tony36

              Great write live it

              • Poetic Licence

                Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏

                  • Poetic Licence

                    Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest off your day

                  • Cassie58

                    You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially 🙂 Much fun reading.

                    • Poetic Licence

                      Thank you for your feedback, always appreciated

                    • David Wakeling

                      This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading

                      • Poetic Licence

                        Thank you for your kind words, have a great week

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Fine words Tobani.

                        "Wise man say,
                        If you want the truth,
                        Don't listen to a Politician."

                        Andy

                        • Poetic Licence

                          So very true, have a lovely week



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