on the wheel of colour
there is no blue
in hues of happy hazel
nature plays its part
as greens browns and golds
hold the key
look at me
those eyes melt in warmth
warmth radiating with tiny flecks
and little light flashes of
sunshine sparkle
as his eyes meet mine
his hazel gaze is replete
with autumn riches on an October
day
my libra love you are molten gold
you are dark chocolate delicious
you are the green valleys of home
you are the backbone of
all i know and cherish
what would i be without you
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is my 100th poem posted on MPS, plenty more in the vaults
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Comments12
Happiest of anniversaries, Cassie ๐๐๐ป๐
Thank you so much arqios for stopping by. You are appreciated.
Youโre welcome Cassie ๐๐ป๐
A beautiful write lustrous in its imagery and full of emotion. Lovely Cassie
A lovely review sorenbarrett. Thank you so much. Happy Sunday.
Are you writing to me? I am a Libra ๐คฃ I truly think your poetry takes me on a magical journey through grace and dignity always. ๐ Happy anniversary ๐๐น๐๐น๐๐น
Are you a libra too Teddy? Well what wonderful people they are โค๏ธ Thank you for the lovely appreciation of my poetry and for the anniversary greetings. 42 years. Have a really enjoyable rest of day. ๐น๐
Bron on the 9th of October ๐
Husband on 6th, daughter on 8th๐
Wow, now you have me too. ๐ค๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
Yep. You are a fraction younger than my daughter ๐
Very Sweet Cassie
Have A Sweet One My Friend
Thank you so much Reynaldo. Very kind of you. Happy Sunday.
Happy Anniversary
Thank you so much Tony. All the best. Happy Sunday.
Ooh! How delicious and rendered so delectably with exquisite imagery and a warming poignancy melting the world away in a breath of heavenly air as it were. Thank you very much for sharing!
Thank you Missy for your warm appreciation. A very happy Sunday to you.
Yes, good write Cassie.
Thank you Orchi. Have a good Sunday.
Many congratulations on hitting your first MPS ton Cassie .. You have a rare talent maโam and no kidding .. this was another gem and I look forward to the next hundreds to come .. Neville
Thank you so much Neville for your kind words. Hopefully more poems to follow in the future. Have a good week.
Lovely writing. Cassie,Your poem revolves around love and admiration, specifically the deep emotional connection and appreciation that reflects the beauty of this person's eyes, warmth, and the way they embody comfort and familiarity. I appreciate how you capture the essence of love and beauty in the beloved's presence. It reflects on how this love shapes the speaker's understanding of themselves and their world.Thank you Cassie I love your thinking.
Thank you for your lovely review Friendship. I appreciate the thought you have put into it. Your kind words much appreciated.
That is a lovely way to being up the big one 100, here is looking forward to the next 100, very enjoyable read
Thank you so much Tobani. Hopefully more poems to follow. Pleased you enjoyed this poem.
You are very welcome
A lovely poem fllled with positivity. I enjoyed reading.wonderful.Made me feel good.
A lovely thing to say David. Many thanks for stopping by. Much appreciated.
Wonderful loving words Cassie. I too am a libran.
Andy
Thank you Andy. Both my husband and daughter are Librans. Teddy too. Quite a club:)
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