Imagining the Impossible

Teddy.15

 

 

Surely there's nothing more perfect

than perfect love?

 

where we could imagine it's perfection

without imagining its carnage?

 

and who in our world

wouldn't want to imagine that?

 

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 16th, 2025 13:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: and yes, back to my favourite subject of Love... ❤️
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Cassie58
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  • sorenbarrett

    To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book into a paragraph. Wonderful and very clever

    • Teddy.15

      My dearest sorrenbarret I wrote this and then came back to add to it but in the end I decided to leave it's rawness and as we all know sometimes less is more and I just went with it, and I'm so glad I did, you truly understand my scribbles and there is nothing more incredibly satisfying than that. Ah love, it can surely be written a an epic novel or in a paragraph that's it's palpable beauty. Thank you kindest of friend. 🌹

    • Parisab

      Great inquiry about the heart ❤️

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you dear Parisab. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        So true Teddy and I have found it.

        Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Awe 🌹

        • Cassie58

          Dear Teddy. Thanks for the smile. Perfect love dear poet. What’s that? Yes, certainly need to use the imagination here and stretch it too lol. We can all dream and hope just for a few niggles rather than carnage 😂. You have done well here with your brevity. Hope you have had a happy Monday. 🌹

          • Teddy.15

            lol i wasn't sure if I should put as humour now I think I should have 🤣 what a funny old game this love can be. Lol thank you my dear Cassie, you made me chuckle 🤭 🌹

            • Cassie58

              Dearest Teddy, without humour love wouldn’t last. I reckon they go hand in hand, especially where marriage is concerned. What do they say, (was it the Bard) the pathway to true love never runs smooth? Enjoy your evening. 🌹

              • Teddy.15

                Oh but he wasn't married to an Italian 🤣 the pathway to true love slides off burnt spaghetti lol ❤️

                • Cassie58

                  Now you’ve got me laughing. Burnt spaghetti eh😂



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