Divine waste

sorenbarrett

After the purging came the rain
God's sweat and excretions baptize babes and rapists
with vomit and urine of redemption
Expulsion of all that nourishes and the profane 
void from bilious bellies of gluttonous clouds
Gomorrah's fires quenched in Noah's deluge
The poet's words fall as tear drops
On hard ground they form mud spots
blood of the word, salvation's sacrament is taken
making all drunken on the waste of the gods

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  • Friendship

    Well-written ,Soren

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you appreciate the read and encouragement.

    • Teddy.15

      Incredibly powerful and it's a kudos from me. 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks so much for the read Teddy and the kind support it is always appreciated

      • David Wakeling

        Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I enjoyed reading

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks David for the read and interpretation it is much appreciated.

        • arqios

          Once the poet’s tears were salt off the Earth… these days the value appear to have dropped almost like a stock market crash.. and still we weep…

          • sorenbarrett

            Hold on to your stock, never sell at the low. The market will raise again. Thanks for the read and comment my friend

            • arqios

              Good investment advice there! And your welcome 🙏🏻🕊️

            • Michael Edwards

              A real raw write - enjoyed the read.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Michael for the read and comment. Always liked my meat more raw than cooked.

              • Cassie58

                The poet’s words fall
                as tear drops

                Whatever horrors befall this earth, there will always be poets around who will record it with their own tears. There’s going to be alot of rain before the sun comes out.

                Powerful write. Thought provoking.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you Cassie I appreciate the read and comment. Yes there will always be someone and the rain will always fall and the sun will always return

                • Poetic Licence

                  That caught me off guard, powerful words of anger directed above,raw, passionate and to the point and i Loved it

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks so much for the read and comment it is always appreciated.

                    • Poetic Licence

                      You are very welcome

                    • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

                      A powerful write!

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks so much for the read and kind comment it is most appreciated. Yes sometimes even a poet has to belch.

                      • NinjaGirl

                        Beautiful write...a lot of anger and questions which I can second!

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thanks so much for the read and comment it is most valued

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Very strong words soren and so true.

                          Andy

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you Andy for the read one does not experience as much rain under metaphor's roof. Appreciate the read and comment



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