Like a meteorite blazing down to earth from infinity
down from the blackest of space
where only true diamonds sparkle
and from down here are seen
as only a human can really see them as bright dots
remember the moment
the meteorite finally shatters into pieces
much like a celebration of sparkling confetti
shared with whoever can see
well that sparkling confetti
is all the love I hold within my aliveness
and it's all for you.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Love
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Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a symbol of fidelity and marriage, light as truth, black the absence of all light but the unity of all color as a dichotomy of loneliness and unity, meteor symbol of transformation and cosmic connection. You have woven them together to end in a thread of love. Very nice Teddy
Can you believe it? 🤣 I do have a soul. Thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
Like diamonds in the sky… whose beauty is in the sharing thereof 🙏🏻🕊
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Dear Teddy, I slowed your words right down and saw the imagery in spectacular slow motion. What an incredibly beautiful sight that was too. There’s a whole lot of sparkling love in this poem. Your posted image together with your poetry are inspirational. Gorgeous imagery. 💜🌹
Thank you so much dearest Cassie. Happy wednesday dear friend. 🌹 💜
May that love forever fall on us all Teddy.
Andy
Indeed dear Andy. 🌠
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