Fine Day Tanka.

Goldfinch60



Soft rays of sunlight

Kissing the morning blossoms,

Whispers of the breeze,

A tranquil dance of nature,

Heart's serenity unveiled.

 

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  • arqios

    Nothing like a blossoming morning to unveil the serene soul 🙏🏻🕊

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind arqios, thank you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine blossoming Gold.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

      • sorenbarrett

        A most beautiful image cast Gold. It falls like sunbeams through a picket fence. Lovely

        • Goldfinch60

          Thgank you soren, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • Reynaldo Casison

          Nice One Gold
          Cool Rhythms

          • Goldfinch60

            Much appreciated Reynaldo, thank you.

            Andy

          • Poetic Licence

            The calming influence of nature, enjoyed the read

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you for your kind words Tobani.

              Andy

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • Teddy.15

                Beauuuuutiful 🌹

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Teddy, thank you.

                  Andy

                • Tony36

                  Excellent write Andy

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Tony.

                    Andy

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • Thomas W Case

                      You paint this picture well.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Much appreciated Thomas.

                        Andy

                      • David Wakeling

                        this is quite a beautiful poem.Well done

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Most kind David, thank you.

                          Andy

                        • Salvia.S

                          Beautifully crafted and visually stunning!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you Salvia, much appreciated.

                            Andy

                          • Cassie58

                            Now that is poetry and at its finest. Thank you Andy.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Most kind Cassie, thank you.

                              Andy

                            • NafisaSB

                              such serene thoughts explained so beautifully
                              enjoyed reading , and experiencing it too

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Thank you for your comment Nafisa, mush apprfeciated.

                                Andy

                                • NafisaSB

                                  most welcome . have a creative day

                                • Accidental Poet

                                  Sounds like a lovers paradise. 😉👍

                                  • Goldfinch60

                                    Thank you for your kind words AP.

                                    Andy



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