Catching fish on a line no hook with barbs no net to entwine
Bait that finny friend would like to see, attractive a delicacy
Words without design, intentions benign
Fresh from the heart no degeneracy friendly hands on a perilous sea
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Good write SB. I went fishing for KP's supper. I caught an old boot so I cooked that for her instead. lol.
Hope it's not too tough. The Beatles used to have one called Rubber Soul. I think that should be sole. Good write Orchi
In my younger days I used to go fishing every weekend, a great time was had sitting there with Nature.
Andy
Thanks Andy for the read and comment it is always appreciated
Enjoyed today's read, have a great weekend
Thanks for the read and comment have a great weekend yourself
You are very welcome and thank you
The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
Oh you picked up the line. Thanks so much for the read and the understanding comment
Nice One Soren
Nice Cool Rhythms
Thank you for the read and kind words of support they are important to me
In real time I haven’t fished for about 25 years which bothers me to no end… and also in real time, poeting as with everything else these days, feels like fishing… I find if I just let loose, and that I have from time to time… hardly anyone would have a taste for my poetry… so what should the ratios be in the give and take… it changes from day to day and from case to case… (sigh) 🙏🏻🕊
You and I are on the same line many times and this is another. Your mentioning fishing and poetry was the knot that tied these two together for me and the inspiration for the poem. Thanks for the read and comment.
An accruing vintage that the orchard shall gift progeny with, shall fish be mounted as deer and other game on trophy walls one day? Time will reveal 😊
Shall poems be mounted near by?
Ah, that would deserve its own display/exhibit section, one might think!
lol catching a fish without a hook, now that's something I would try to do, 🤣 I guess sometimes things aren't meant to be caught, a most wonderful amusing write dear sorrenbarret 🌹
When young I camped deep in the mountains where there was a small lake full of fish, after catching several broke my hook and ran out of bait, spent the day catching more on a bare golden hook without a barb. It was more sporting, hard to keep on but unhurt to release. Thanks for the read and comment it is as always most appreciated.
Oh now that sound like my kind of day, such a gorgeous memory, thank you for sharing my dear sorrenbarret 🌹 🐟
nicely done ,Soren
Thank you so much. Have a wonderful day
Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like fishing. And the worst is when the fish aren't biting. This gets a fave for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
Right on target my friend. Poetry writing is my fishing now days. No hooks just bait. Thanks for the read and comment.
You're welcome.
I think you have a good enough fish trap for us!
Thanks for the read and the kind words. I certainly would not consider you fish. Appreciate the support though.
Haha!
Beautiful poem with a soothing and uplifting quality!
Thank you so much Salvia your kind words mean a great deal to me
Like this one… John
Thank you John your read is most appreciated and glad you liked it.
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