Senryu ( to sunset)

Teddy.15

 
stars await the show
 
theatre fit for those, in love 
 
sun comes down to rest. 
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  • sorenbarrett

    And what a beautiful theater and show it is each night the sun adlibbing with variations on the show. Some times clouds are invited as guest actors and even the birds applaud. Beautiful

    • Teddy.15

      Why, thank you dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 I've seen quite a few. 💜

    • Distant View

      A starry night is indeed a wonderful sight, and it can be so romantic too! Very nicely penned, Teddy!

      • Teddy.15

        Hello dear friend, thank you so much for coming by, always a pleasure to see one of my oldest friends of MPS 🌹

      • MendedFences27

        It's the imagery in this poem that is its strength. Taking Nightfall and turning into a performance. The time where lovers thrive. Loved it - Phul A.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dearest Phil, I don't know anyone who doesn't like sunset, I'm pretty spoilt here in the summertime, seen some great ones in the world. 🌹

        • Cassie58

          Sunset, and how glorious they can be for anyone who takes the time to soak up all that beauty. No wonder the stars are impressed. Have a beautiful Thursday dear Teddy. 🌹

          • Teddy.15

            Hello my dear Cassie, thank you so much, I had the pleasure to see them a few years ago in Madagascar too,.Tuscany I spoilt 🌹 happy Thursday dearest Cassie. 🤗 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Beautiful senryu Teddy.

            Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dearest Andy. 🌹

            • Thomas W Case

              Brilliant an beautiful. I want to eat a sunset lol.

              • Teddy.15

                Oh Thomas I'm blushing 🤣 lol 🌹

              • Accidental Poet

                Simply beautiful Teddy. As the Sun sets, you outshine the stars. 🌹

                • Teddy.15

                  Awe, you being such a romantic heart, I'll take this as a huge compliment, I'm a bit poorly at the moment, sorry for my lateness, you make me smile always dearest A.P biggest of hugs my dear friend. 🌹



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