If I Were Made of Glass.
If I Were Made Off Glass.
Would You See
The Real Me.
Or.
Would You Just Look
Straight Through.
Me.
Tobani Feb 2025.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: February 27th, 2025 03:07
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Comments9
If you were mirror glass, I would be looking at myself 🙂 However, this morning I am looking straight through plate glass and focusing on what’s on the other side. That happens to be a silver birch tree, tresses swaying in a light breeze against a blue sky back drop. Thank goodness for clear glass. Enjoyed the read Tobani.
You clearly have a beautiful view, thank you for your kind words
Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I have walked into a glass door not seeing it. Lovely
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Liked and Faved🙏🏻🕊 home rum ⚾️ 🌟
Thank you for your kind words and fav, enjoy the rest of your day
You too and you are most welcome 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you
I wonder. Probably accidentally jostle and thereby shatter the glass, you know? Never see the real entity, just enjoy the fantasies it culls. Fascinating and pointedly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
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Fantastic.
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Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking glass here
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A playful poem! This made me smile, but it has a serious side to it too! Some people are more complicated than others -- some you can see right through, others are dark horses in deep waters!
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Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and perceive others. Brilliant in its brevity, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
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You're welcome. You too!
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
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