Fun in (Sun)Day

Poetic Licence

Wise Man Says (4).

 

Wise Man Says.

Some Trees Have.

More Than One.

Bad Apple

 

Wise Man Says.

Look Beyond What.

You Can See.

Then You Can See.

Everything.

 

Wise Man Says.

Don't Have Affair With.

Your Neighbours Wife.

You Will Run Out.

Off Sugar.

 

Wise Man Says.

If You Do Not Like.

What You See in.

The Mirror.

Then Turn The.

Mirror Round.

 

Wise Man Says.

If You Cannot.

Handle Losing.

Then Do not.

Take Part.

 

Tobani Feb 2025

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  • arqios

    Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled 🙏🏻🕊️

    • Poetic Licence

      I wouldn't know where to start, enjoy the rest of your day

      • arqios

        Enjoy your day as well! 🙏🏻🕊

      • Goldfinch60

        Fine words and some home truths Tobani.

        Andy

        • Poetic Licence

          Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day

        • cellinic

          This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes

          • Poetic Licence

            Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day

          • sorenbarrett

            Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all

            • Poetic Licence

              Thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. 🌹👏

              • Poetic Licence

                Thank you Tristan for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  You're most welcome. You too!

                • MDStone

                  Tobani,
                  Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.

                  • Poetic Licence

                    Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day

                  • Neville



                    Wise words indeed .. and now pinned forever upon a most appreciative page .. Neville

                    • Poetic Licence

                      Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day

                    • Cheeky Missy

                      Hahaha! There's nothing like common sense which herein is rendered to effect with a twinkle of good humor to soften the reality until the imagery daintily trimming it seems like powdered sugar as the poignant facts hang, suspended. Thank you for sharing.

                      • Poetic Licence

                        Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Superb work.

                        • Poetic Licence

                          Thank you for your kind words, have a great week

                        • Cassie58

                          Dear Tobani, I am very much a fan of your wise man says pieces. Combined wisdom and humour. A fine combination for sure.

                          • Poetic Licence

                            Thank you that's very kind of you to say

                          • David Wakeling

                            So much wisdom here.Made me think.Wonderful.

                            • Poetic Licence

                              Thank you for your kind words, have a great week

                            • James Michael

                              Very much enjoyed the last stanza!

                              • Poetic Licence

                                Thank you for your kind words, have a great week



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