a pitcher of sunshine
pours through undressed
window glass
a pure liquid gold
to pool on white sheets
crumpled in disarray
drenching exposed toes
kissing ankles
to settle on veiled thighs
how warm starts my day
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Author:
Cassie58 (
Offline) - Published: March 2nd, 2025 09:50
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How sensuous in every way. This poem drips with beautiful imagery and metaphor. A most lovely poem
Thank you so much . Pleased you enjoyed my poem.
A lovely way to wake up, very sensual and soothing write,really enjoyed
Thank you Tobani. Happy Tuesday to you.
You are very welcome, have a lovely day
There's nothing like a warm kiss on barely veiled skin to waken the sleeper, is there? And that bright look piercing through the thickness of slumber suffices, more especially when Sunday promises a serene day of rest. Very lovely and rendered to effect with heightened passion, exquisite imagery and a tantalizing poignancy, thank you for sharing.
Thank you Missy for a very encouraging review. All the best.
As soft and sensual as the sun’s first rays brightening the dark behind one’s eyelids and kissing them awake. This beautiful poem delivers, Cassie! Well done poet and friend! Happy Sunday to you.
Pleased you enjoyed my poem Tristan. Many thanks for a lovely review. Happy Tuesday.
You are welcome, Cassie!
Now there’s a way to create poetry! Superbly rendered, Cassie. Liked and Faved 🙏🏻🕊️
arqios
So pleased to get a fav from you arqios. Thank you very much. Happy Tuesday.
It’s not the first time, I hope. 🤞🕊️
A fine write Cassie.
Thank you Orchi for stopping by. Have a good Tuesday.
Hello dearest Cassie, this is absolutely stunning, reminds me of the perfect summers day right here in Tuscany. 🌹
Thank you dear Teddy for your continued support. Have a beautiful Tuesday 🌹
Wonderful start to the day Cassie.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy. Have a beautiful Tuesday.
As we all know, the devils in the detail .. but on occasions like this, skilfully invoked imaginations come into their own .. Such exquisite ink reclining seductively in its very own write .. Neville
Thank you Neville, exquisite ink is high praise and so very much appreciated. Have a glorious Tuesday.
wonderful imagery, and beautiful rendition - the words draw a picture in our mind's eye that is unforgettable
Thank you dear Safina for your warm review. Have a beautiful Tuesday dear poet.
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