long before he is seen
his call is heard
distinctive, unmistakable
that shrill whistle
pierces morning air
there in bold splendour
perched proudly
on the tallest branch
his look out
a silver birch sentinel
leafless dangling tresses
cold on the cusp of spring
a keen eye surveils
all in country gardens
prior to lift off
magnificent in wing spread
perfect in flight
forked tail and red/brown feathers
glide at an angle
before soaring
blue sky Tuesday
there is no sadness
in his parting
he will return for sure
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Author:
Cassie58 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Since our cypress was felled last year, this red kite now settles on the upper branches of our silver birch, a stone’s throw from my bedroom window. A poem for those who admire our avian friends.
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Comments16
Oh, so it isn’t just the fallen cypress but the general location. That is so nice to have local (territorial) creatures. 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you arqios. We are fortunate to have these wonderful birds back in our region, and moreso that they frequent our gardens. Have a lovely day.
Such a blessing 🙏🏻🕊
A picture, snapshot, video of a beautiful creation of nature captured in you words. So life like I could see and hear it. Very nice Cassie
Your thoughts are very much appreciated. Thank you so much for your encouraging review sorenbarrett.
Magnificently captured!
Thank you Salvia for your kind comment. Much appreciated.
Cassie, dear poet and friend, this is a beautifully penned piece! The title “Kite” drew me in, thinking of sunny days and string-tethered flyers. But what a delightful surprise to find instead this free, organic creature of nature! Your vivid imagery brings this bird to life - from its piercing call to its magnificent flight. I love how you’ve captured its proud perch and keen eye, watercoloring a picture of both stillness and potential energy. Also, I loved the progression from unseen caller to soaring silhouette. A master's touch, imho. The final stanza brings pure optimism and joy. Truly uplifting, Cassie, just like your feathered friend. I needed this read today, so this gets an easy fave from me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
P.S. Please do send my love to that dear kite!
Thank you Tristan. We have many birds that visit our gardens but the red kite is one that stands out. Magnificent in flight and has such a distinct call. Pleased you enjoyed my efforts here and a special thanks for the fav.
You are most welcome, my friend. Hope your weekend is going well.
A beautiful bird, they are like ballet in action, enjoyed the read
Many thanks Tobani for stopping by. Enjoy the rest of the day.
You too
Wow you know that something beautiful came of the old cypress you loved and had to get rid of, that's beautiful, kudos on your imagery dearest Cassie, you always make me smile reading your imagery, I can see it all and actually weirdly feel I'm beside you. 🌹 💐
Hello Teddy, the red kite now frequents the top branches of the silver birch, as the cypress has been felled. We are fortunate to have these beautiful birds in our region and moreso that they visit our gardens. Thank you so much for your continued support of my efforts. Have a beautiful day. 💜🌹
Oh! How deliciously rendered with a sense of the exquisite despite its disarming seeming simplicity in form. Taking readers off to that priceless moment in a heartbeat, oh, this is why I love poetry! With gorgeous imagery and a titillating poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.
Thank you kindly Missy for appreciating my nature poem. We are very fortunate to have these wonderful birds in our vicinity. And one of them frequently perches atop our silver birch tree. The form - its simplicity - yes. Can work well on occasions. Have a lovely day Missy.
Yes a beautiful poem.A tribute to a wonderful bird. So well written.Enjoyable to read
Thank you so much David. I appreciate your kind comments and your visit.
A fine Poem about a Wonderful Bird.
Thank you so much Kevin. I appreciate your visit and your thoughts. Have a good day.
Come to Australia and poem some of our dickey birds, Cassie. Avian Aussies need you!
Great poem about a beautiful bird.
Hello Dave, thank you for your visit and your appreciation of my poem about the red kites that frequent our area. So pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a great day.
Red kites are wonderful to see Cassie. I have been to Gigrin in Powys, they feed hundreds of them there each day.
Andy
Thank you Andy for sharing. That must have been an amazing experience for you to see. The most I have seen in my vicinity was eight, and that was a very memorable experience as they winged through the sky.
hi Cassie another beautiful poem
your words always express your poem
so pefectly the kite is such a lovely bird
i love all birds we get kestrels here
hovering over fields for a snack
another show of your writing talent
beautifully writen jimxx
Lovely to find a review from you Jim. Thank you so much. I know how much you like our avian friends. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Have a good evening.
so descriptive that i can visualize the whole scene - thanks for sharing this lovely piece of verse
Thank you dear Safina. Pleased you enjoyed my poem. Have a great day.
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this poem is so descriptive that i can visualize the flight in my mind's eye
thanks for sharing
I got your original response Safina, but delighted to get a further one. Thank you so much dear poet 🌹
You honor your Red Kite with love and respect. May he frequent your window view. Beautiful words Cassie. 🌹
We have lots of birds visit us in our garden, but the red kite is the most majestic by far. Always a delight to see them soaring in flight. Thank you so much AP for your kind words, visit and that red rose. Much appreciated.
Great imagery Cassie brought me back to my kite flying days well done
Thank you gray. I used to fly kites as a kid too. Pleased my poem brought some memories back to you.
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