In the sleepless nights
And the echoes of love
Do you remember me
A lost story of love
A time long ago
Before we were pulled apart
A time when we were young
Discovering our hearts
Oh, how the years
So quickly they pass
Seems like just yesterday
I was awestruck by a lovely lass
And now all these years later
Still, my heart longs for you
I can’t help but wonder your response
When the past calls to you
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Author:
Sharon\'s Poet (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: March 5th, 2025 06:08
- Comment from author about the poem: They say that nothing lasts forever. I say some things have the ability to last beyond the concept of time. ❤️🌹
- Category: Love
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Comments9
I too would like to believe that some things last beyond entropy and this poem is very tenderly written with strong emotion weaving the two into a well done tapestry
You have the right to believe in whatever you want soren. Go for it. 😁👍🌹
That's an interesting and thought provoking write, people will vary in answers, myself I believe they can, nicely written and well expressed
Thank you for your compliment and thoughts Poetic.
You are very welcome
A fine write AP.
Thanks Orchi. What happens when KP calls you? 🤔
I put in my ear plugs! lol.
Non now Orchi, be nice. 🤣
You are the living & breathing embodiment of your authors note my friend .. what a testament to true and undying love you have shared with us today .. I swear if I had three wishes .. one of them would be that Sharon got in touch with you .. 💛😎👍
Now wouldnt that be interesting? 🤔 Dare I say it might produce another poem or two. 🌹 Thanks brother. 😁
Your feelings of love have never wavered, half a story that is quite fascinating and simply makes you, you. 🌹
As a certain famous sailor once was quoted: "I yam what I yam." 😁
Impressed by your sincerity.
Thank you Natalie. If you cant have honesty in what you write, why write to begin with. Especially when it concerns someone you've loved for 58 years. 🙂🌹
its beautiful a story of love lost but stayed in your heart
Thank you sheta for the read and compliment. Much appreciated. 👍
you're very welcome
That love will be there for eternity and beyond AP.
Andy
Thanks Andy. 57 years and counting 🌹😉👍
Your words are brimful of love. A beautiful poem dedicated to the memory of that young girl who stole your heart so
many moons ago. Poetry which impacts. Perfectly lovely AP.
Just reflecting the impact she had on me. Thanks Cassie. 😁👍
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