The Success Of My Dreams.

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The Success of My Dreams and Aspirations.

 

The Success of My

Dreams.

And Aspirations.

Should Not Be Affected.

By The Success.

Of Your.

Failures.

 

Tobani Feb 2025

  • Author: Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 6th, 2025 02:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this about those pushy parents who push there children to study and do something they do not want to do, because that is what they wanted to do or be, but failed or where just not good enough, instead of letting the children decide for themselves.
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  • Views: 70
  • Users favorite of this poem: GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
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  • arqios

    Some things do need to be said and shared before the damage is done. Good work. 🕊🙏🏻

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    • orchidee

      Good write T.

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      • sorenbarrett

        Seen so many times on sports fields. Well written and in a style that provokes thought and rereading. Very nicely done

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        • Doggerel Dave

          Too much personal history to allow me to comment muchly on this. Let me just say 'Hear Hear'!

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          • Mutley Ravishes

            Parents. Who needs them?! Wait a second...

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            • David Wakeling

              Yes excellent point.let children have a try even if they fail.Good poem

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              • Cassie58

                A meaningful write which speaks to me about the determination to hold tight to your own dreams. Too many parents thinking they know best thwart the aspirations in their offspring. Nicely penned Tobani. Have a happy Thursday.

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                • Tony36

                  Excellent write

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                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

                      Not easy being a parent. Very wise words! A very important message.

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                      • Goldfinch60

                        So very true Tobani.

                        Andy

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                        • rebellion_in_sanity

                          Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing 🙏

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                          • NafisaSB

                            so true - there are still some around there who would like their children to become what they themselves aspired for - thankfully the numbers are dwindling i think because the current generation is more self assured, definite and courage about doing what they themselves want

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                              • NafisaSB

                                you too have a beautiful and memorable one

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                                • cellinic

                                  I fully agree with you!

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                                  • RSM0812

                                    It reminds me it takes two to tango. You can't let other people bring you down to their level. I think everyone knows a person like that. Lol

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