Half a Bag of Shit.
If you are my friend, please take half of this.
My life is full of it, so here is half a bag of shit.
I have way more than I feel I really deserve.
I thought as a friend you might like to share.
Hey, where are you going to, come back here.
I thought friends are meant to share and care.
Be thankful, i only asked you to take half of it.
Goes to show our friendship is just a bag of shit
Nataiella 2018.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Wrote this a few years ago about a so called friend who let me down badly, short and sweet. Hope you all have a great weekend
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Ohh, I should have the half of the bag that's empty, if I was you! heehee.
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I have a gardener that gave me a bag of shit. I thanked him and spread it in my garden, now everything is much greener. A read that has a meaning in the wordplay that engages the mind. Nicely done or should I say (dung)?
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Friendship is a tricky one.They will borrow the car but not pay when they smash it.Powerful poem
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Being let down and letting others down can be some of life’s most painful experiences. Feeling this quite strongly🙏🏻🕊
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You too and you are very much welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you
You only need one so called friend like that & you can so easily find yourself up to your neck in it .. Who needs friends like that .. NO ONE, that's who .. It can be a real eye opener tho' can't it .. Neville
It certainly can,thank you for your feedback, have a great weekend
Have had this happen. I relate. Well expressed, Tobani! ❤️🙏
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You’re welcome!
Relatable Tobani. I think most people have had a friend who has disappointed. It hurts like hell.
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Powerful work.
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I would always helpo friends no matter what Tobani.
Andy
A real friend would do that, hope you a wonderful day
Nothing like pseudo friends to leave you to shoulder all, yes, ALL of it, eh? Why must this gorgeous description resonate so firmly?! Suffice it, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a wickedly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you! You likewise.
I;ll try to carry half for you rif possible. There may be that one friend who mught take it all for a day just for a short release. But those friends are far and few. Nice write, great concept and so very true.
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