Dependency is a tendency to use a iron glove not love
Whether a mother or a lover, another's independence does shove
To grovel in a bubble of reliance with walls of compliance
Until soon the one within, pops the bubble with a pin of defiance
From a balloon hollow, tantrums follow a fire out of control
With no walls to prevent falls no parent on patrol
Without a guide by its side baby begins to explore
Until it crawls and then falls, from the window of the eighth floor
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A haunting and thought-provoking exploration of the delicate dance between dependence and independence. Well written!
Thanks so much for the read and comment Salvia it is most appreciated
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise buildings.Very well constructed poem and argument
Thanks David yea I say either don't build them or build them without windows. Actually this whole mess can be more easily resolved, just don't have children. Thanks for the read and comment
Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” but on the reverse side the iron grip that ruins people for life- far too many resulting crimes against humanity demonstrate this. 🙏🏻🕊
Thanks Cryptic for the read and comment. Yes sometimes people fall out of accident, sometimes neglect, others abuse and still others from being too accustomed to freedom.
Indeed! Quite bewildering and tragic and amazing all in the same breath 🕊🙏🏻
Very sincere, deep and multi-faceted view on dependency associated with " bubble of reliance with walls of compliance". Sorry for delay in reply. best wishes
Thank you so much for the read and interpretation. Yes as with most things in life balance seems to be a key. Too much of anything results in a fall
A well written thought provoking write, those who create dependency are reliant on our compliance to fulfill their own insecurities and needs, to be in control, loved the read it
Thanks so much for your read and insightful interpretation it is most appreciated. You are right on track with my thoughts and the answer lies at the fulcrum.
You are very welcome
Well crafted, Soren, Your poem is about control! Your poem explores the complex nature of dependency and independence in relationships, particularly between a caregiver and a dependent individual. It highlights the tension between nurturing and suffocating, illustrating how over-reliance can lead to a struggle for autonomy. The concluding imagery suggests the dangers of unmonitored freedom and the potential consequences of emotional neglect. Metaphor, The "iron glove" symbolizes harsh control, while the "bubble of reliance" represents a false sense of security. Soren, Your poem could be interpreted as a reflection of the speaker's observations or experiences related to dependency in relationships, possibly informed by personal or societal perspectives. encouraging readers to reflect on their own relationships and the potential consequences of dependency. It serves as a cautionary tale about the importance of fostering independence alongside care.
Thank you for your most insightful read and interpretation. Dependence and independence is a complex balance between too much and too little and where the fulcrum lies may shift from one case to another.
You are welcome, Soren, you're so right! it's all about balance.
Damn ........................ we were not expecting that .. but I don't know why not because it happens all the time .. Neville
Thanks Neville for the read and comment. It is the unexpected that can't be controlled for.
I have a 12 year old and this is truly and remarkably relatable, you know from one day to the next he has changed, I will reason always and try to shine a beacon but it's bloody hard. Thank you dear friend, almost as if you are my inner voice. 🌹
Thank you Teddy have had four children of my own and grandchildren as well as my own experience as a child. Yes the balance is a difficult one but there is no other way. Thanks so much for the read and comment it is always appreciated
Wow! I am not sure if this inspired by a real event, but the metaphor for relationships is stark and real! Well done, an easy fave! ❤️🙏
Thanks so much Tristan your read and comments are most appreciated. The balance between control and not is a delicate one for a parent. I haven't always been the best at balance. You learn more with each child hopefully and each relationship as well
Ah. Indeed. I knew it was regarding relationships and that makes perfect sense. Also, very relieved to hear a baby didn't literally fall out an 8 story window. Whew. Not that it would be cool at any age. Well done, on this. As a parent myself, I surely relate. I'd imagine many do. Again, well done!
Tremendous work.
Thank you so much Thomas it is appreciated
Dependency can bring so many obstacles in our lives soren.
Andy
Indeed it can. Thanks so much for the read and comment Andy
Wow, a searing lyrical, white knuckled ride.
Thank you for the read and kind comment it is as always most appreciated
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