Wise Man Says (5).
Wise Man Says.
Your Eyes Are.
For Seeing.
So Don't Let Your.
Eyes blind You.
Wise Man Says.
If You Have.
Nothing.
You have Everything.
To Gain.
Wise Man Says.
Desire For Money.
Is Not a Need.
It is Another.
Form of Greed.
Wise Man Says.
There is No Need To.
Love, Honour and Obey.
Just Do as Your.
Told.
When You're Told !!!.
Wise Man Says.
It is Only a.
Dead End.
If You Build.
The Wall.
Tobani Feb 2025.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of fun
- Category: Humor
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Good write T.
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An enjoyable read! And five times over🙏🏻🕊
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You too and you’re welcome 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you
Fun with wisdom a good combination. Very nicely said as well
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Some wonderful wisdom here.I always learn so much here.
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Truly amazing write
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Profound wisdom wrapped in simple words.....
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Much fun here Tobani. I do love these little gems you put together for us. All good , but the fourth one has such special appeal in its humour. Have a happy sunny Sunday.
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Your poem "Wise Man Says" conveys wisdom through a series of aphorisms that challenge conventional beliefs about materialism, authority, and personal fulfillment. It emphasizes the importance of perception, contentment, and the dangers of greed and obedience without questioning.nicely done ,Poetic Licence
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Good thoughts Tobani especially the last one, we should build bridges.
Andy
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Well said great piece of writing
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