I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
I sit in my room and think
Of what it is I did
I lived, I existed,I breathed
And I am getting shammed, called names and other things
I have made mistakes in the past
And I will keep making them
I cant seem to do anything right
I talk and get told to shut up
I try my best in dance , gets criticized
Volleyball, gets told I will never make it or be anything
Being a friend, all are fake too
I trust people too much and look where it lead me
I try and try and try and never get acknowledged
I am nice to people and what do I get?
Assholes
The only people who are really nice to me are thoses who weren't before
Those who I ignored
I cant do anything right
I hurt those who I love
I am a monster
Always hiding behind a smile
That smile is plastered on my face
And it wont come off
I cant do anything right
The only thing I can do
Is not be here for both me and for you
Not a popular option but it works
Whether or not its for good or for worse
Do you think I want to fucking cry every night
NO I DONT
But I do
And I cant do anything right
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Author:
Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 11th, 2025 19:02
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
You're writing poetry at what, 14? You're doing something right!
Here's something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song "Power" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!
Aw thank you I will make sure to check it out! Oh my gosh thank you for your comment, well appreciated.
You're welcome!
lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it
Thank you Cade and we do gotta.
your welcome
A sad point of view. When one doesn't believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.
Thank you.
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