Cant do anything right

Hey!


Notice of absence from Hey!
I am currently not going to be on for a while.

I sit in my room and think
Of what it is I did
I lived, I existed,I breathed
And I am getting shammed, called names and other things

I have made mistakes in the past
And I will keep making them
I cant seem to do anything right
I talk and get told to shut up

I try my best in dance ,  gets criticized 
Volleyball, gets told I will never make it or be anything
Being a friend, all are fake too
I trust people too much and look where it lead me

I try and try and try and never get acknowledged
I am nice to people and what do I get?
Assholes
The only people who are really nice to me are thoses who weren't before

Those who I ignored
I cant do anything right
I hurt those who I love
I am a monster

Always hiding behind a smile 
That smile is plastered on my face
And it wont come off
I cant do anything right

The only thing I can do
Is not be here for both me and for you
Not a popular option but it works
Whether or not its for good or for worse 

Do you think I want to fucking cry every night 
NO I DONT
But I do
And I cant do anything right

 

  • Author: Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2025 19:02
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 16
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  • Mutley Ravishes

    You're writing poetry at what, 14? You're doing something right!
    Here's something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
    Have you checked out the song "Power" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!

    • Hey!

      Aw thank you I will make sure to check it out! Oh my gosh thank you for your comment, well appreciated.

      • Mutley Ravishes

        You're welcome!

      • sheta

        lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it

        • Hey!

          Thank you Cade and we do gotta.

          • sheta

            your welcome

          • sorenbarrett

            A sad point of view. When one doesn't believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.

            • Hey!

              Thank you.



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