Wise Man Say (6).
Wise Man Says.
Ears are Your Understanding.
Off the World.
Don't Let Your Ears Hear.
Only What You Want to Hear.
Wise Man Says.
Your Wealth is Not.
In Your Bank.
Your Wealth is in.
Your Heart.
Wise Man Says.
Too Many Cooks.
Get in The.
Bloody Way.
Wise Man Says.
Don't Shout From.
The Rooftops.
It is a Long Way.
For You to Fall.
Wise Man Asks.
If You don't Get.
The Key to the Door.
Until You are 21.
How do You Get.
In or Out.
Before Then.
Tobani Feb 2025
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Knock on door til 21…knock on wood after… 🙏🏻🕊️loving this series☺️
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Enjoy your Sunday as well! You’re very welcome 🙏🏻🕊
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well written.Poetic Licence , your poem "Wise Man Says" reflects on the complexities of life, the wisdom gained through experience, and the challenges faced during the journey of growing up. It suggests that life is filled with obstacles and questions that require careful consideration and introspection.
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Always enjoy your wise men say Sunday version it brightens the day and makes me feel good that I didn't go to church. Lovely
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Excellent.
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Indeed, these are great. And that last stanza really rocks, changing it from Wise man says to Wise man asks...and the question asked. Indeed. Profound. Well done, my friend! Happy Sunday to you! 🌹👏
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You are most welcome, my friend!
Oh lol, good write Confucius, erm, PL.
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Hahaha! I begin to see him now, wizened and shaking a bony finger at the listener while tendering this advice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Bony fingers are correct, thank you for your kind words, very much appreciated as always
Wonderful words Tobani especially this one:
Wise Man Says.
Too Many Cooks.
Get in The.
Bloody Way.
My daughter and I almost come to blows if we both working in the kitchen. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
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This made me smile. Loved the last line. Just nailed it.
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Usual excellence!
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