The circle

sorenbarrett

 

Ouroboros of love and hate doesn't know what it ate
Fangs of venom at one end the other a siren tail does bend
A twisted circle becomes an eight writhing to consummate
Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity

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  • arqios

    Best poem on the topic that I have come across🙏🏻🕊️

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Cryptic your gracious words are inspiring and humbling at the same time another ouroboros.

      • arqios

        You’re welcome Soren🙏🏻🕊

      • orchidee

        Good write SB.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you Orchi appreciate it

        • Teddy.15

          Says a lot about love and hate, forever a grand educator, your poem is magnificent 🌹

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Teddy your encouragement is always appreciated my friend

          • Salvia.S

            Powerful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery is vivid and the exploration of dualities is captivating. Well written!

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Salvia for the read and kind words of support they mean a great deal.

            • David Wakeling

              Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the fable.Well done

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you David for your review and most kind words of encouragement it means a lot

              • Poetic Licence

                May I just say simply brilliant,, loved the write

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much for the read and comment and for constant support.

                  • Poetic Licence

                    You are very welcome

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Profound! And excellent poem and an excellent representation of Ourboros. Well done on this, Soren! 🌹👏

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks so much Tristan for the review and your most generous words of support.

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        You are most welcome, my friend!

                      • Lorenz

                        fascinating subject !

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thanks Lorenz for the read and comment it is always appreciated

                        • Neilton

                          Before I saw your comment I had to look it up and I can sincerely admit that your poem explained it perfectly!! Amazing work

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you for your attention and review it is most appreciated

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Tremendous.

                          • Doggerel Dave

                            Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I interposed.....

                            Short, neat explanatory write, Soren.

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thanks Dave for the read good to hear from you. Have a great day

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Immortality is a circle of life soren that goes on for eternity. Good words.

                              Andy

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you Andy I appreciate your read and comment as always.

                              • Tom Dylan

                                A fascinating write, Soren. Really informative

                                • sorenbarrett

                                  Thank you Tom for the read and encouraging words of support.

                                • rebellion_in_sanity

                                  WOW and WOW. Let me not embarras myself by repeating the same word. A last wow perhaps for "Reclined infinity the masculine devouring femininity"

                                  • sorenbarrett

                                    Thanks you are too kind my friend. Your words are most appreciated

                                  • ElizabethMoroz

                                    Profound symbolism and visual imagery here Soren, with the masculine devouring the feminine lines being particularly powerful: thanks for the explanation of Ouruborous. The depth of the symbolism evoked goes right into the heart of the mystery of life itself. So beautifully done. Thankyou ! Elizabeth

                                    • sorenbarrett

                                      Thank you so much for your review of this older piece and your kind words of support and encouragement they are most appreciated



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