Hands that grasp

sorenbarrett

Jealousy a slave owner's chains that hold their possession tight
Love seen as something owned, not a gift but a right
Birthed out of greed, DNA its seed, twin brothers of revenge and hate
No prisoners escape, they all suffer rape as their servile fate

Forgiveness the key that will set free the one that it gives
Unlocked shackles of hate, no longer freight, guilt falls through love's sieves
Believing men do the best they can, given the tools they possess
Breaking chains of blame, leaving no rancor to you oppress

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  • arqios

    Makes one wonder and ponder with much interest wherein the metaphor lies and points. 🙏🏻🕊

    • sorenbarrett

      I'm afraid people will not want to hear this one Cryptic. It may ruffle a few feathers but what are we to do if we can't throw out ideas and views that are not popular. Appreciate the read and comment my friend

      • arqios

        Yes, in the sociopolitical atmosphere of the day we are liable to be squelched, cancelled, boycotted, ostracised and vilified, oh and demonised and criminalised as well… 🙏🏻🕊

      • David Wakeling

        Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks David I appreciate your review and words of support thank you.

        • Poetic Licence

          That will put the cat among the pigeons, jealously, love, hate, control, for some controlling the green eyed monster is incredibly difficult, are they seeking or expecting forgiveness, one to ponder over my Sunday cup of tea, enjoyed

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Tobani for the read and comment your words of support are most appreciated

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • RSM0812

              Visually astonishing. It captures so many emotions nicely. My favorite of the day.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much for your most kind and supportive remarks they are cherished.

              • Salvia.S

                Powerful and thought-provoking! Your poem masterfully explores the destructive nature of jealousy and the liberating power of forgiveness and love.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much Salvia for your read and kind words of understanding.

                • orchidee

                  Good write PL.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks so much Orchi it is appreciated

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Such true words soren, rancour must not exist in life.

                    Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Andy I appreciate your read and kind words of support

                    • Tom Dylan

                      A thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you, Tom for your read and most kind words of support. They are always appreciated.

                      • Neilton

                        Such a great meaning behind this poem! I loved it

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you so much for the read Neilton and the comments. Your words are most appreciated.

                        • NafisaSB

                          i agree with your views on jealousy as well as forgiveness. gives us thought for soul searching

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you very much Nafisa for your read and kind words of support they are highly valued and always appreciated

                            • NafisaSB

                              you are welcome...so are yours too - always -

                            • Courtnie McKern

                              Nicely written

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you so much. I appreciate your read.



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