The Race.
You Don’t Decide When
The Race Starts or When
The Race Will End
But
You Can Control How
The Race Is Run.
Tobani March 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Another piece of poetic wisdom, short and to the point. Nicely done Tobani
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Yes very true.Excellent
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And how we finish always says more about us than how it is we began the race🙏🏻🕊️
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Well said,.Excellent.
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So very true. Wish we could recall this simple wishdom everytime we fee dejected because we were not in control
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Fantastic wisdom.
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Good write PL.
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Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.
Andy
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So true. Try or not it’s up to you.
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Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father's injunction to, "enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there..." whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
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