twilight trek

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
🕊 🙏🏻 often and again, away 🙏🏻🕊️


Branches breathe

leaves sway slow

whispers weave

cool winds grow

 

Night unfolds

stars ignite

frosted gold

guides our flight.

 

Steps persist,

mountain looms,

paths untwist,

hope resumes.

 

 

 

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    Hope is always there arqios.

    Andy

    • arqios

      So it be! Thanks Andy🙏🏻🕊

    • David Wakeling

      I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent

      • arqios

        Indeed we keep going. Thanks kindly 🕊🙏🏻

      • sorenbarrett

        To me this poem represents life's journey where the final word is hope. A lovely structure with short two or three word lines like footsteps taking each line onward. The imagery gives texture to the poem enhancing its meaning. The rhyme is an echo of each foot step and is so natural it is hardly noticed. Most lovely.

        • arqios

          Thanks Soren for amply regarding this poem. Much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊

        • Poetic Licence

          The tender footsteps of our journey in life, reminding us there is, hope, softly written with nice imagery, enjoyed the read

          • arqios

            Thanks kindly 🕊🙏🏻

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • arqios

              And the day approaches

              • arqios

                Each to their day they arrive

              • Mutley Ravishes

                Those first two lines especially, Arqios. Then, Middle Earth teleportation!

                • arqios

                  LOTR, somewhere where we all once lived and breathed. Thanks kindly. Barrovian greetings 🕊️🙏🏻

                • nephilim56

                  lovely, hope is everything

                  • arqios

                    Indeed it is. Thanks kindly 🙏🏻 🕊️

                    • nephilim56

                      most welcome

                    • dimpy

                      nicely penned...

                      • arqios

                        Thanks so much. That is so kind of you and much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️

                      • orchidee

                        A fine write A.

                        • arqios

                          Thanks O🕊️🙏🏻

                        • Cheeky Missy

                          There's a subtly disarming winsomeness to the seemingly simple stanzas trickling down the blank page like a delicate stream of pure water. Beautiful and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

                          • arqios

                            Thank you kindly and you are most appreciatively welcome 🕊️🙏🏻

                          • Tristan Robert Lange

                            Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! 🌹👏

                            • arqios

                              Thanks T🙏🏻🕊️have an excellent weekend 🕊️🙏🏻

                              • Tristan Robert Lange

                                You too, my friend. You are most welcome!

                              • NafisaSB

                                like the mellow tone of the poem, and the spirit of hope - good read

                                • arqios

                                  Thank you kindly, Safina🙏🏻🕊️

                                • NafisaSB

                                  what a lovely message of hope - even if the mountain looms - the path wil dlefinitely unwind and reveal itself if we have the patience and will to wait

                                  • arqios

                                    Thanks safina; much appreciated 🕊🙏🏻

                                  • sunshine777

                                    🙂

                                    • arqios

                                      🙏🏻🕊

                                    • arqios

                                      Thanks so much @Qurrathul Ain for the Fave 🙏🏻🕊

                                    • Pandy

                                      So succinct but said so much! I love this 💫

                                      • arqios

                                        Many thanks, Pandy; you are much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️



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