Notice of absence from arqios
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long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
laughter lifting through the trees
glimpses of sun-blest promises
sugar-coated whispers
catching in the breeze
fruit bowls, waterholes
and refreshing icy poles
interlacing fingers share
starry nights and lazy days
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 9th, 2025 00:53
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Friendship, Cheeky Missy
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Comments7
Just keep smiling arqios, as I do.
Andy
Most definitely, Andy; thanks 🙏🏻🕊️
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with your opening lines
long, top-down drives
even shirtless-tans
sweet strawberry-kisses and
glorious watermelon stains
Here the imagery first line is reinforced in the second, a top down drive (in a convertible) is seen as a top down in shirtless tans. Sweet strawberry kisses is seen in the red watermelon stains of the second line. This is most ingenious and certainly most poetic on another level. My congratulations and a fave
Glad that salience has gotten over to the reading side of things, thanks kindly Soren🙏🏻🕊️
A drive down more youthful days, enjoyed the read
Thank you, at this age memories are all we have 🙏🏻🕊️
So true
Here it goes again, season must’ve shifted the cohort
lovely done, your poem revolves around summer activities and experiences, such as enjoying fruits, laughter, and leisure time spent with loved ones. It paints a vivid picture of sunny days, playful interactions, and the warmth of human connection.
Thank you Friendship, glad this poem delivered its intent. 🙏🏻🕊
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my face. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
Thanks friend 🙏🏻🕊️
You are most welcome!
Excellent work.
Thank you🙏🏻🕊️
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