April's Senryu

Teddy.15

 

April's rain will fall 

 

rainbows will make their entrance

 

dark and light entwined. 

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  • sorenbarrett

    A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.

    • Teddy.15

      My dearest and very special of friends thank you, I've been offline due to studies, tomorrow I will be finished so will be more present here, missed you very much dear sorrenbarret 🌹 thank you dear friend. 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      May thta light always be in your life Teddy.

      Andy

      • Teddy.15

        I'll take both, thank you so much dearest Andy. 🌹

      • Thomas W Case

        Tremendous, dear Teddy.

      • spilleronsheet

        The much awaited senryu, and the cherry on cake, the click….adds to my imagination…dark and light really entwined….

        • Teddy.15

          They sure are dearest Spills, remember that always, there's not one without the other I promise. ❤️

        • Thoughtless

          And after the rain?

          • Teddy.15

            After the rain then comes the sunshine, a merry go round of lights spectacle. 🌹

          • NafisaSB

            may the rainbows lead you to the pot of gold - short but sweet poem

            • Teddy.15

              Dearest NafisaSB Thank you so much, it\'s a senryu so there are strict rules of syllables first line 5 second line 7 third line 5 , senryu- emotion thank you once again for coming by. 🌹

              • NafisaSB

                thanks for the lesson - now i just write what comes to mind, and flows out :
                earlier used to write limericks and also experiment with different types of poems, now the urge to do so has disappeared, unfortunately



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