Just a Waste of Fucking Time.
You keep telling me I am just a waste of Fucking time.
I am a piece of shit.
I am the little Bastard boy
Something the dog dragged in.
A waste of God's air.
Something to be ashamed of.
Not worth pissing on if on fire.
But mainly I am a waste of Fucking time.
Is that why.
You
Keep hitting me.
Kicking me.
Insulting me.
Shouting at me.
Punishing me.
Telling me when I can go to school.
Telling me when I can eat.
Telling me when I can go to bed.
Telling me when I must sit in the cupboard.
Telling me when I can come out.
And you do all of that because I am a waste of Fucking time.
If I am such a waste of your valuable Fucking time.
Couldn't you find something better to be doing with your Valuable Fucking time.
Nataiella. 1976
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry for the language, but it is what was said. I wrote this in my childhood, speaks for itself i feel. Have a great Weekend
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You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!
Is that for real or a bit of a laugh?
Me being daft! lol.
No worries
It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely 🙏🏻🕊️
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Most welcome PL🙏🏻🕊
How effing true! Sad, and funny.
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The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read
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your poem "Just a Waste of F--king Time" explores themes of self-worth, abuse, and the psychological impact of being belittled and dehumanized. The speaker grapples with feelings of inadequacy and worthlessness, stemming from the harsh treatment they receive from an authority figure, likely a parent or caretaker. The repetition of "waste of f-- king time" emphasizes the speaker's internalized belief that they are undeserving of love and respect.I am so sorry ,but you need to move on ,I could never understand why anyone do this their child.
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated, I have moved on, I wrote this 50 years ago when I was a child, have a great weekend
Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.
Andy
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Language is nothing to apologize for when well used! And, my friend, you certainly have well used it here. I read this when you published it and thought I had commented on it, but evidently not! My deepest apologies for the extremely delayed engagement my friend! Hope your weekend rocked! 🌹
Thank you kindly for your feedback, very much appreciated
You are most welcome.
Having meant since your posting this to comment, perhaps now shall suffice. The language utilized effective in communicating the situation, there's little need for an apology, your French seems in good working order. While in truth I've no leg to stand on in making this argument, yet seems to me there's no parent who can avoid facing the tremendous responsibility in their lap when forced to raise another person to adulthood successfully, which seems would logically also drive the angst and irritation when finding themselves frustrated in achieving success. It was never acceptable to punish another for your own problems, however we do it all the time. There. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day
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