When your rear-view mirror calls
I’ll be the one you see
The one you couldn’t forget
The one you had to leave
A time when our lives
Were not of our command
When we couldn’t see our future
And places where we land
But some memories never let go
And when you least expect it
There before you in your mind
A smile you’ll come to except it
With the stars above so clear
You’ll wonder of where I am
As so many years have past
You, now a woman and me a man
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Sharon\'s Poet (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 6th, 2025 00:38
- Category: Love
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Comments6
She will always be there for you AP.
Andy
Thanks Andy. We have history together her and I. And thats my greatest treasure. 😉🌹
Is that you saying 'Cooeee, I'm here' as she looks for you?! heehee.
Well, its definitely not you saying to KP "Come take me away on a love boat forever". 🤔
Heehee. Or - Yes, I'll be there when you look for me too. I never went away. Here I am, hiding behind this cupboard! lol.
A lovely and enjoyable read
Thanks Poetic, glad you enjoyed it. 😉👍
You are very welcome
Stunning rhyme dearest A.P may your heart always be filled will love and cherished memories. 🌹
Thank you Teddy. She's been in my heart for 57+ years now Teddy. And there she'll stay. 🌹😊
Reflections on the past with fondness and remorse with nostalgia and an open heart are the feeling I get from this poem. Lovely wording that is tender and soft. Very nicely done.
soren, you're a very good at getting to the point of a message. And I thank you . 🌹
Amazing read. the calling rearview mirror never fails. 🙏🏻🕊️
Thanks arqois. It's always calling to me, so I'm not likely to ignore it. 😉👍
Most welcome 🙏🏻 🕊
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