Notice of absence from arqios
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hapless indulgences
animated silences
quiver
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hankered imagination
ambiguous synapses
quibble
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each way you turn
each thought you churn
new lessons learn
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potted flower plants
line your driveway
mind you don't crush them
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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Be careful where you let your mind wander, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much. The wandering mind can be as dangerous as a distracted mind🙏🏻🕊️
You are very welcome
Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead unjustified beliefs become something else. I see this a second level metaphor and message to be careful what you think for it may well be something else. Enjoyed this one
It’s quite satisfying when these metaphors are uncovered. Thanks Soren🙏🏻🕊️
Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in summer.There is always depth in your work.Well done
So true about that aspect of the potted garden 🪴 thanks mate🙏🏻🕊️
Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing the potted flowers indeed. Well done on this, my friend. And excellent metaphor! 🌹👏
Only too glad that worked out. Thank you🙏🏻🕊
You are most welcome! 🙏
Good write A.
Thanks O🙏🏻🕊️
There's a subtle depth in these disarmingly light yet eloquent stanzas, the conclusion too perfect thereby. Charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
That’s so good to hear. Thanks kindly 🙏🏻🕊️
Good words arqios we all learn new things going through life.
Andy
Thanks Andy 🙏🏻🕊️
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