Notice of absence from arqios
π ππ» often and again, away ππ»ποΈ
π ππ» often and again, away ππ»ποΈ
Scattered like stars
thoughts glimmer:
constellations of ideas
mosaics of the mind's workings.
Words twist and turn
a labyrinth of meaning
each line reflects
each stanza holds a riddle
Neon lights and ancient shadows
merge in a collision of epochs
their spirit breathes through the chaos,
a tapestry woven from tradition and innovation.
A chorus emerges, blending the visible and the hidden.
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- Published: April 20th, 2025 00:40
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Comments8
Fine words arqios, see you there.
Andy
Thanks Andy, much appreciated ππ»ποΈ
Good write A.
Thanks Oππ»ποΈ
A new day and the sun was out.
have you ever read a poem that pieces of it seem like bits or fragments of past memories but now it starts to fit together like a jig-saw puzzle? This poem is just that. Always thought of how miraculously ingenious writing is and how the mind can so quickly interpret bits of broken twisted lines to form not just a word but a meaning and join such so quickly into an entire picture and thought. The Kabbalists believe that meaning is written in the stars and to one who understand this that they call the (angels alphabet) can read the past present and future. Ah but my thoughts wander. A fave
Indeed there is a bridging and transitioning in the mind of the narratives that are separated fragments that logically have no hope of being strung together. Angels alphabet is an interesting school of thought. I might look back into that and see where it takes me. Thank you kindly ππ»ποΈ
I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of time.Wonderful
Thanks Dave ππ»ποΈ
Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A fave from me, my friend. πΉπ
Ah, thatβs so nice. Thank you and happy Easterπππ»
You are so welcome, dear friend and poet. Happy Easter to you too! βοΈπ
Beautiful imagery.
Thanks Thomasππ»ποΈ
Wowww
lovelyβ€
Thanks dimpy πππ»
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