Flower

sorenbarrett

An orchid grows on hard rock, roots clinging to a rough surface

Beauty pressed against cold stone, with painted lips kisses solid granite

From its nest of roots the Bennu bird sprouts flowering petals of the sun

A whirlwind of fiery blossoms erupts from seas' parted crevice of rock lifting Elijah fed by crows

An epiphyte nourished by God, manna that falls from heaven

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 10th, 2025 03:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Bennu bird Egyptian sacred animal associated with the gods of creation Ra and Atum sun gods. It laid the egg of creation and is associated with the Greek Phoenix Elijah Israelite prophet, while in hiding, God sent ravens to bring him bread and meat, he was taken up by God in a whirlwind of fire Epiphyte attach themselves, high up on trees or rocks, to get sunlight obtaining water and nutrients differently than earth rooted plants Manna the miraculous food God gave the Israelites while wandering in the desert This poem is a metaphor
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  • Poetic Licence

    Thank you for the beautiful write and a little history lesson, I had never heard of that before. This one did test my eye sight !!!, enjoyed the read

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Tobani I appreciate the read and most kind words of encouragement. Sorry about the eyes I was tired of the standard type and thought a flower merited something a little more flowery.

      • Poetic Licence

        And it did, you are very welcome

      • Teddy.15

        A stunning piece and metaphor. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you my friend for your review and most generous reply your words always serve as encouragement and are most appreciated.

        • arqios

          Mysterious ways for mysterious days.🙏🏻🕊️

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks my cryptic friend for your read and kind words they are most appreciated

          • David Wakeling

            I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great poem.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you very much for the read and most kind words of support they are always most appreciated

            • MDStone

              Soren,
              Love the font. It matches the message that blooms in this poem. Hope thriving even when the surroundings say it shouldn’t be so, beauty in the hard places. Thank you for sharing and for the educational piece as well. Loved it!

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you for the review and most kind words. It is such support that sprouts new growth and flowering feelings I thank you

              • Friendship

                Well done, Soren, and an intensified poem. Yet it had me thinking; excellent job.
                Your allusions to the Bennu bird, the Greek Phoenix, the prophet Elijah, epiphytes, and manna are noteworthy. Each of these elements is intricately linked to motifs of creation, survival, and the mystical interplay between the divine and the natural world. Your poem is structured as an extended metaphor, deftly connecting mythological and religious symbols to broader themes of existence, sustenance, and the divine. Furthermore, your poem explores the theme of resilience and the emergence of beauty in harsh environments. It posits that life and beauty can flourish even in the most inhospitable environments, as exemplified by the orchid growing on hard rock. It appears that you aim to inspire readers to discover beauty and strength in their own struggles, emphasizing the notion that even in adversity, life can thrive through divine support and resilience.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you Friendship for your review and interpretation of this poem it is always appreciated

                • Lorenz

                  A hard rock orchid ? What a tempting musical inspiration !

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks so much Lorenz yes it might be worth a go but by which group. Disturbed?

                    • Lorenz

                      I also like to joke nicely !

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use of Bennu, the Ravens, Elijah, the Manna...all of it brilliantly woven into deep, philosophical, metaphor. Well done, Soren! 🌹👏

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks my friend for the encouragement it is most appreciated as always

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          You are most welcome!

                        • John Prophet

                          Wonderful sophisticated work.

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you John for your review and most gracious words of support they are most appreciated

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Fine words and history lesson soren.

                            Andy

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you Andy I appreciate your review and support

                            • Salvia.S

                              Vibrant imagery and symbolism weave a beautiful tapestry of resilience and spirituality. Well written!!!!

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you Salvia for your read and most kind words



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