Love searched for Completion, catching her in the embrace of Passion
where Yesterday had seen Deception dancing with Charity
She turned her back on Infidelity and returned to Solitude with Compassion
In an orgy she adored Peace, finding Chastity deep inside Diversity
April was into May until June came
and with her Lilly hugged Rose while in Violet
Shakespeare said what's in a name
Bliss remains inviolate
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Author:
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- Published: April 23rd, 2025 03:58
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What an amazing poem. All the great states of mind: Love Passion Charity Compassion Peace and Diversity.All woven into the old question What is in a name.I
think just about everything is in these names.Well done
Thank you David this one grew out of a bit of tongue in cheek thought. I appreciate your read and kind words.
I had a friend once, several in fact, during the nascent days of online poetry. We were friends and comrades without the aid of offline acquaintance- hence we grew intimate in our words and essence even as we had masqueraded behind avatars, nom de plume and internet “anonymity.” 🕊🙏🏻
Thank you Cryptic I think you are onto something there. Appreciate the read and comment as always
‘A rose by any other name’ kind of situation 🤩🕊🙏🏻
Wow! This poem is both playful and rich with philosophical reflection—like a modern parable cloaked in wordplay and floral metaphor. And subversive, too! Chastity found in an orgy, Peace adored through hedonistic convergence, and Bliss remaining untouched by it all. Brilliant, Soren. Seriously. You flip norms on their head, challenging those who cling to them. Compassion, peace, and bliss—these cannot be confined by our rigid frameworks. Bravo! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
Thank you so much my friend this poem began as I reflected on how many women's names were months, and forms of morals It then began to weave together. As of norms I always was a rebel. Appreciate the read and comments
Indeed. Me too! 🤣 Neat how poems blossom from such ponderings. My poem today came from seeing a "wake" of turkey buzzards having a feast. Anywho, you are most welcome, my friend.
Exquisite imagery and poetry dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 stunning
Thank you Teddy for your review and most kind words that are always valued
Good write SB.
Thank so much Orchi it is appreciated
You piece words together so effortlessly. Bringing to life a beautiful rhythm and again; a favorite 🤩
Thanks so much Shamrocker for your kind words of support they are always appreciated
Tremendous work.
Thanks so much Thomas it is always appreciated
Bliss overcomes all ills in our lives soren.
Andy
Thanks Andy I suppose that it does. Appreciate the encouraging words of support
excellent...
Thank you so much Dimpy for the read and kind word it is most appreciated
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