In the warmth of a sunlit day,
We walk through the whispers of time,
With hearts that beat in sync,
And eyes that hold a universe of dreams.
Each moment, a fragile breath,
Filling the air with hopes and fears,
We find beauty in the shadows,
And comfort in silence’s soft embrace.
Life is a dance of love and loss,
Where every tear tells a story,
And laughter mingles with the echoes
Of days we wished would never end.
Beneath the sky, so vast and true,
We share the weight of our thoughts,
Turning the pain of a broken past
Into the strength that binds our souls.
In the night, stars flicker like memories,
Reminding us of moments that felt so real,
While the moon watches over our secrets,
And the darkness cradles our hidden fears.
Yet in this journey, we stand strong,
Facing the storms with open arms,
For every goodbye leads to a hello,
And every scar a mark of survival.
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Very enjoyable read on a Sunday, with some lovely lines, nicely done
I had thought that would be the case. Thank you for confirming this🕊🙏🏻
You are very welcome
wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to read.I love "universe of dreams".Some many powerful images here and it ends with wonderful positivity. Well done.
Ah, that’s a satisfying delivery! Thanks for letting me know how it went. That makes a whole world of sense to a sometimes tricky journey of writing. Most grateful to you, amigo 🕊🙏🏻
A beautiful view of life explodes with this poem where trails traveled and wounds received all blend into memories. Very nice
Thanks Soren, trust you’re having a good weekend 🕊🙏🏻
Welcome and a good weekend to you as well
Perhaps a week’s break is not enough for the masses…when is it ever?
Never.
And yet somewhere about us are unhearing ears... 🧏🏻🕊️🙏🏻
Precisely. There's none so deaf as those with ears.
A very beautiful write!!! Love it..
Thank you kindly, Salvia. You are much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊️
Must thank @Cheeky Missy for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️ you did say why you do it... and this is just a way to acknowledge you as well 👍
This is too beautiful and deliciously evocative. Every single line is loaded, the stanzas trickling down the page like raindrops after the storm, solacing the thought of yonder momentarily. Superbly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
I had a kinda gut feel that this would be seen as such by your reading eye. Thank you kindly. Love the raindrops after imagery. ⛈ 🙏🏻🕊️
Rather, thank you again.
Wow! In just a few words, I lived a thousand memories, felt joy, love, magic, and pain. But then, I also gathered up the fragments hopeful that nothing was lost or wasted and that there are new memories, joys, loves, and magic ahead! Thank you for sharing.
That is such a wonderful poetic experience shared here. Thank you so much for dropping in and leaving such a wonderful word. 🙏🏻🕊️
Wonderful poem, my friend. That last stanza reminded me last night staring up at the stars, Mars, and the Gibbons moon. It was bright, beautiful, alluring. Much like this poem. Well done! A fave. 🌹👏
We are situated rather poorly here to look up at the night sky. That and the weather make it doubly hard. Glad that past experiences can fuel poetry. Thanks kindly dear friend. 🕊️🙏🏻
You are most welcome, my friend! I guess I was enjoying it on your behalf as well! 🌝
Mighty kind of you mate🙏🏻🕊️
Powerful observations and yet rendered forth with eloquent poetry with a style to enrapture any reader. A poem to linger on in the mind well after the reading. You have a great talent. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
Thanks Tony, your valued words are much appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
Tremendous.
Thanks Thomas🙏🏻🕊️
I think we can all relate to this.
Well said.
Thanks Kevin. Truly appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
Your words dance off the page. Well done.
John
Thank you so much John. Mayhap the world (meaning myself first) would learn to dance again. 🙏🏻🕊️
Beautiful fulfilling words arqios.
Andy
Thanks Andy, good to be back! 🕊️🙏🏻
beautiful. this is definitely a message of hope and love in the journey of life
enjoyed it
Thank you safina, a most treasured review 🕊🙏🏻
am honored - thanks
keep them coming
Your support ensures they keep coming 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
glad to know this - always there for sure
have a good day
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