Notice of absence from arqios
π ππ» often and again, away ππ»ποΈ
π ππ» often and again, away ππ»ποΈ
The tides still reach though hands grow thin,
Oars lie quiet where once they'd been.
From spade to sail, from heart to shore,
A song remains, but boats no more.
Beneath the hearth where old tongues weave,
A tale is born in ember’s sleeve.
The voices rise, the echoes call,
In fireside lore and shadowed hall.
A bard’s bright words, a poet’s strain,
Still whisper through the lashing rain.
Let not their song fade, nor their rhyme—
For stories guard the soul of time.
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Author:
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- Published: May 13th, 2025 03:01
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 53
- Users favorite of this poem: Victor Bolshov, sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Damaso, Muse of Calliope, Tristan Robert Lange
Comments12
So nice, this word-lace.
Thanks for the Fave and this ascribing, "word-lace" is of a world of its own, I shall have to borrow that coinage some time soon. ππ»ποΈ
Consider it a gift π
...and a precious gift, coinage is! ππ»ποΈ
A lovely gentle write, which flows so natural, a poet's strain, I fear not, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much...may this week get better and betterππ»ποΈ
You are very welcome
Wonderful wording encapsulates a most important message that of storytelling and poetry. This even flow gains a fave
Thanks Soren. Most kind of you ππ»ποΈ
dearth bader with their lite shaver
Hahaha, you're hilarious!
Bored as a board in dry winter airπ€£
Dearest me! You'll shrivel up at this rate!
Not far from the truth there!
This is very Shakesperean. I see a medieval minstrel with a lute entertaining the king. Wonderful poem about the power of stories to go forever.
Oh wow. That might be something to look into later on...a full on play of sorts. Seems a bit much in terms of work. ππ»ποΈ
Thanks for the Fave @cheeky missy ππ»ποΈ
Excellent write
Thanks Tony much appreciated πππ»
You're welcome
Thanks Damaso for the Faveππ»π
And thanks for the Fave as well @Muse of Calliope
Powerful.
Thanks Thomas ππ»π
Those stories bring memories and wonder to all our lives arqios.
Andy
Thanks Goldy ππ»π
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress the entire piece. Excellent job! A fave!
And thanks for detailing what is good about these piece. ππ»πgreatly appreciated ππ»
You are welcome, my friend!
so beautiful, and so haunting - the memories of good old days
enjoyed it tremendously
keep them coming
Thank you most sincerely, safinaππ»ποΈ
you are always welcome - have a beautiful weekend
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