Notice of absence from arqios
🕊 🙏🏻 often and again, away 🙏🏻🕊️
🕊 🙏🏻 often and again, away 🙏🏻🕊️
The stars do not answer,
but they do not turn away.
We stand beneath their quiet fire,
where doubt cannot hold, and something
- small, vast, immeasurable - finally shifts.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 15th, 2025 05:34
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- Users favorite of this poem: vicecream, Damaso, Cheeky Missy
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Stellar aberration and parallax a metaphor for an internal shift is a great metaphor for change. Very nice Cryptic
Thanks Soren, that exactly where that’s at🙏🏻🕊️
Under the watchful gaze of the stars we and the world move on, for better or worse, enjoyed the read
Yes indeed! Thank you and may your days be pleasant🙏🏻🕊️
Yours too
thank youPL🙏🏻
Simple enough to be true
Hmm.
alright, it\'s never quite that simple... 🤣
Hahaha!
But seriously... thanks🕊️
You're very welcome!
Yes, his labourers do shine.
Indeed they do unto His glory🙏🏻🕊️
Now lookie here, website - "I told you I was human - accept this comment, at my second attempt at posting it!" lol.
As I was saying before I was cut orf - Good write A. Also probably - stellar aberration and parallax, etc - wot SB said! 🙂
LOVE THIS!! SO MUCH TO THINK ABOUT AND FEEL INTO HERE but so subtle at the same time
Thank you for the fave, @vicecream. Many times subtlety is the best way to get through. But I ramble on. You are much appreciated🕊️🙏🏻
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Stars are are the holes in heavens floor arqios.
Andy
Now there is an awesome view Andy! Do they need vents up there? Peepholes? Or do they need regrouting...?
LOL
Fine words, mate. Nicely done.
Thanks Tom, much appreciated mate🙏🏻🕊️The poem "sleep on it" is a fresher post, perhaps that might offer a fresher meaning as well.👍(unashamed plug)LOL😂
Will check that out. I am usually a day or so behind on checking the poems out. 🙂 Will get my review over by Monday mate. 🙂 Have a good weekend.
You too mate! Have an awesome weekend 🕊️🙏🏻
Thanks for the Fave🤩 @Damaso 🕊️🙏🏻You are much appreciated.👍
Funny, huh? Charming and so beautifully rendered with haunting imagery whose delicacy appeals, inevitably, with a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Funny enough for change to transpire, however minute the degree. Thanks so much CM🙏🏻🕊️
Something so Wonderful just looking Up and Seeing light that took Centuries to reach us.
An Astronomer last year said the Film 'Titanic' made him angry because when Rose was in the Sea looking at the Stars: She would not have seen those Stars because of her Position in the World. The Film Makers put any old Configuration on the screen. But picky I think. A very Deep poem.
Picky in Fiction and Art but sloppy in real, offline life-moments... I can be the same sometimes, LOL Thanks kindly 🌌🙏🏻🕊️
Very nice!
Thanks SB, 🕊🙏🏻
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