Shade

sorenbarrett

Shadows small grow long in the fall, darkness takes their place
Fading light impairs memory's sight, a blur of moving pace
Cooling air, as ice of despair weathers an aging face
The call of night a warm bed's delight, at the end of day's race

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  • orchidee

    A fine write SB.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi appreciate it

    • Lorenz

      Landscape of shifting seasons...

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Lorenz seasons shift in time and life, appreciate the read

      • Victor Bolshov

        Beautiful, as always. Few words that introduce you to a lot of thoughts.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks so much for the read and kind words of support they are always most welcome and appreciated

        • Poetic Licence

          A very relatable write, nicely written

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Tobani so nice to have you back. Thanks for the read my friend

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • MDStone

              The seasons with all their feels, changes, and challenges also bring their own special “delight.” So much like life. Thank you, Soren, for the introspection. I felt the coolness of the shadows, the loneliness of darkness coming way too soon. But I also snuggled in tired to a warm bed with a comfy quilt. Now I’m ready for another go of it!

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks MD yes we age with the seasons and when the cold season of life comes I look forward to a warm sleep under a blanket of turf. Appreciate the read and kind words.

              • David Wakeling

                As I get older I look forward to sleep more and more. Wonderfully created poem.Strong rhyme.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thanks David for the read and yes I hear you getting older myself sleep is not a bad thing but something I look forward to.

                • Salvia.S

                  A hauntingly graceful verse—quietly powerful, with a gentle melancholy that lingers.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you Salvia for your review and most kind words they are most inspiring and motivating and are appreciated

                  • Jerry Reynolds

                    A fine write, SB. I can relate for sure at my age.

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Jerry for your understanding and support they are always appreciated.

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Wow. Powerful poem, full of depth. This is a wonderful metaphor that can be interpreted in a few very impactful ways. In this, I initially read it as the passing of life to death and, how, death is really providing comfort and relaxation from a long, tiring, but worthy existence. Well done, my friend. Beautiful! 🌹👏

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thank you my friend you picked up on the initial intention of this poem right away. So glad that it was not too obtuse. I do appreciate your reads and comments Tristan

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          You are most welcome, Soren. A brilliant poem speaks for itself...and this poem has done just that. 🌹

                        • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

                          Short sweet and a great write!!!

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thanks so much for the read and kind words they are appreciated and valued

                          • Mottakeenur Rehman

                            The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood. Lovely work!

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you for your read and analysis of this poem your supportive words are of great value and cherished

                            • Goldfinch60

                              The end of the day can be so relaxing but life is so much better when you arise in the morning soren.

                              Andy

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you Gold for the read and kind words of encouragement and support



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