Waves of fresh wind dance,
stirring thought.
Sunlight strikes,
and skies shift,
darkened and undone.
The canopy of words ripples,
foliage alive, in rhythmic undulation.
Cloud cover whispers,
lifting the finite chest,
boundless and fleeting.
We watch
as our thoughts glide along,
a wave swelling melody
woven in to crystal water streams.
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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Your poems always make me think. Besides the beautiful images created by your poetic words there appears a message here. My view is that the (wind) that stirs the thought that then (dances) the light goes off and thoughts (shift) though the darkness of the mind there is a (ripple) in the words (whispers) emerge then thoughts liberated (glide) unimpeded as a song or stream. Well it was just a first thought and try. Loved it
Thanks Soren! The unimpededness is superlatively liberating. 🕊️🙏🏻
I see a beautiful river coming down through a rainforest. I am reminded of Henry Kendall's poem "Bellbirds".Great poem.Captures the scene very well.
Ah, that I have to read... I hope it is online. Thanks compadre🕊️🙏🏻
Blowing cobwebs of off the mind allowing the words to flow again, enjoyed the read
Ah, a beautiful image and such a useful motion, thanks so much PL🕊🙏🏻
You are very welcome
Half a dozen here, another there… not easy to tell how the situation really goes…
Precisely. Fascinating, isn't it, though?
Superlatively! 🕊️🙏🏻
Very lovely and laden with imagery whose exquisite beauty lends a delicacy to the reflection. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Heartfelt thanks CM🙏🏻🕊️
A pleasure to read, with a very abstract, thoughtful nature that I like. Has some great lines, like "foliage alive, in rhythmic undulation".
Thanks kindly. Sometimes my innate style runs agains the grain for most readers. You are much appreciated🙏🏻🕊️
Wonderful gliding words arqios.
Andy
...the poetic glide is a slide to an excellent pond; thanks Andy 🕊️🙏🏻
Now I know where to come for the metaphorical poetics I love ! Plus the way you weave nature into the fabric. LOVE!
May it ever be; thanks Pandy. 🙏🏻🕊️Let the Muse continue their song 🎶
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