The old coffee shop

Tony36

 At the old coffee shop 

The old folks meet

Drinking coffee 

Talking about life

 

One by one

They gather in their seats

And join in whatever discussion had begun

 

They discuss the state of things

Of how things are falling apart

How theirs was the best generation 

Taking each word by heart

 

Some look down on the youth

Others say give them a chance 

But both sides agree

Things were better in the past

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 12th, 2025 08:57
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  • arqios

    An exact image then and now 🕊🙏🏻

    • Tony36

      Thank you

      • arqios

        Welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        A great write and great reflection on how each generation feels they were better and how the younger shrug it off as the discontent of old that don't understand the present. Lovely

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • MarcWalk

          Hey Tony,

          I enjoyed this read. I have long been fascinated by coffee shops as communal spaces and the theme of nostalgia. I think your poem touches upon these themes in interesting ways.

          Keep writing, buddy!

          - Marc

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • David Wakeling

            This is clever.A common complete of old people is they blame the next generation for messing things up.Enjoyable read mi amigo

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • NinjaGirl

              And it will be the same, when those young are the new old.

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • Goldfinch60

                So true, being an 'oldie' myself things were better in the past.

                Andy

                • Tony36

                  Thank you

                • Swarovski20

                  Yes, falling apart. Yes, they discuss and what are they doing?

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you



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